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On the Farm

I wake up at five each morning, I hear cock a doodle doo my stomach’s gurgling but I won’t eat until I'm through; as the horses need feeding on hay and crunchy carrot, and I must give cuttlefish to Polly our screeching parrot Pink piglets slurp as they suck milk from the sow, The young calves are all mooing at Daisy the cow Pitter patter raindrops fall, perhaps I will get wet when I take my yelping pup to be neutered by the vet I climb onto the tractor, the cold engine splutters as it starts, alas I hear the woosh from the sheepdog as he farts. Tim always travels with me to bark at all the sheep - rounding up the bleating lambs, he truly earns his keep Water gurgles in the gully as the tractor speeds along, and the dawn chorus chirrups, I adore their morning song. In the meadow bees are buzzing on the autumn breeze, Ah ah ah atishoo, the golden pollen made me sneeze When I’ve done my chores , bacon rashers sizzle in the pan, Bess the cat purrs loudly as I open her ‘Whiskas’ can, Then we’ll snuggle up in front of the crackling log fire, soon I will be snoring, as forty winks I now require. Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet 10/23/21

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Date: 11/15/2021 9:03:00 AM
Back to say Congrats on what I thought was a winner!
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Date: 11/14/2021 9:09:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your creative/cute story win. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 11/14/2021 5:32:00 AM
WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Date: 11/13/2021 4:17:00 PM
Wow Jan, just terrific! I can tell this one took a lot of time, with the clever rhymes, the onomatopoeia words on every line, the story line of a day on the farm, and the classic Jan wit woven into the entire tapestry. Very much enjoyed reading your well written tale, and am happy for your win with Emile. Congrats and hugs ~ John
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Date: 11/13/2021 10:44:00 AM
Big Congratulations, Dear Jan. And I do hope you are feeling better today!
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Date: 11/13/2021 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations Jan! Your fun-filled poem earned a distinguished place in my onomatopoeia contest, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 10/25/2021 2:15:00 AM
Jan, Great fun to read...Delice
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Date: 10/25/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Delice:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 5:20:00 PM
Righteous ink my friend, I like how you fitted a fart into the works! Awesome!!
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:22:00 PM
you know me well lol:-) I couldn't resist including a farting sheepdog lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 3:38:00 PM
That’s marvellous Jan, clever and amusing, well done… Belle :-) xx
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Date: 10/24/2021 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Belle I hope Emile likes it, it took quite a while to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 12:38:00 PM
This really is a great poem Jan, you fit all the words in so cleverly, and keep faithful to your inimitable wit, I really enjoyed the read, all the best in contest, cheers David
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Date: 10/24/2021 12:59:00 PM
Thanks David, i am amazed by the amount of comments:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 11:25:00 AM
Clever! Enjoyed!
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Date: 10/24/2021 11:27:00 AM
thanks Rico i am thrilled by the number of comments!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 9:32:00 AM
Hi Jan, you are so creative~a farm filled with fun! Good luck on the contest! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/24/2021 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Paulette, I have learned so so much since i joined the site:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 7:17:00 AM
A truly delicious onomatopoeic serving, Jan. You have done an excellent job, but I'm not surprised! I'll have to come visit your farm one of these days :) :) Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/24/2021 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Paul i hope Emile likes my effort I am thrilled to get so many comments:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 6:05:00 AM
Move over ‘old Macdonald’, your farm’s been requisitioned. Well done, Jan. All the best in the contest. Terry
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Date: 10/24/2021 8:15:00 AM
thanks Terry it was such fun to write and I am thrilled at so many comments!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 5:20:00 AM
Really fun farm poem, Jan: The sounds really bring the barnyard to life. SuZ
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:21:00 AM
Thanks Suz, it was such fun to write and i am amazed its had so many comments already:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 4:47:00 AM
Sights and sounds of your poem evoke life on the farm. Each stanza-- an apt voice in onomatopoeia, Jan. All the best.
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:07:00 AM
Thanks for your lovey comment Vijay:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 4:38:00 AM
You've accomplished writing a wonderful story using many required words of onomatopoeia. Well done, Jan!
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:06:00 AM
Thanks Jenna, i couldnt resist the Old Mcdonald had a farm song too lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 3:22:00 AM
Jan this was delightful and for sure a winner. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:06:00 AM
I hope the sponsor likes it karen:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 1:27:00 AM
Fantastic poem, Jan. Hugs.
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:05:00 AM
Thanks Victor, it was fun to write:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/24/2021 12:24:00 AM
Great use of the sounding words, Jan, good job the sheep dog was outside lol Tom
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:05:00 AM
lol you know me and farty poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/23/2021 8:59:00 PM
G'day Jan ... life on the farm is great, and it should be mentioned that the same chores go on day after day - thanks Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:05:00 AM
My parents had a small holding I know what hard work goes into dealing with the animals and cultivating the land:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2021 7:19:00 PM
This is really a classic, Jan! So well executed... In fact, your humor just slays me. ~ Laughing so hard, I can't breathe... :) gw
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:04:00 AM
I couldnt resist the farting sheepdog lol, oh the sounds and scents of the farm lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/23/2021 7:14:00 PM
I can't wait to read this to my husband because he grew up on a farm. He will enjoy it so much. I did too. Moo!
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:04:00 AM
Thanks Marikate, I wonder if he can relate to the flatulent sheepdog lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2021 7:01:00 PM
Wow, Jan this is superb in so many ways. LOve it. Good luck.
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Harry:-) I so appreciate all your support:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2021 6:02:00 PM
This is such a fun poem, worthy of the recognition. Good luck in Emile's contest.
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Date: 10/24/2021 5:02:00 AM
Thanks Milton, i hope Emile likes, it it took a long time to get it ready to post:-) hugs jan xx

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