On the Farm

I wake up at five each morning, I hear cock a doodle doo my stomach’s gurgling but I won’t eat until I'm through; as the horses need feeding on hay and crunchy carrot, and I must give cuttlefish to Polly our screeching parrot Pink piglets slurp as they suck milk from the sow, The young calves are all mooing at Daisy the cow Pitter patter raindrops fall, perhaps I will get wet when I take my yelping pup to be neutered by the vet I climb onto the tractor, the cold engine splutters as it starts, alas I hear the woosh from the sheepdog as he farts. Tim always travels with me to bark at all the sheep - rounding up the bleating lambs, he truly earns his keep Water gurgles in the gully as the tractor speeds along, and the dawn chorus chirrups, I adore their morning song. In the meadow bees are buzzing on the autumn breeze, Ah ah ah atishoo, the golden pollen made me sneeze When I’ve done my chores , bacon rashers sizzle in the pan, Bess the cat purrs loudly as I open her ‘Whiskas’ can, Then we’ll snuggle up in front of the crackling log fire, soon I will be snoring, as forty winks I now require. Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet 10/23/21
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Jones Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Back to say Congrats on what I thought was a winner!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 9:09 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your creative/cute story win. Have a blessed day writing away..................
Agustin Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 5:32 AM
WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Watt Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Wow Jan, just terrific! I can tell this one took a lot of time, with the clever rhymes, the onomatopoeia words on every line, the story line of a day on the farm, and the classic Jan wit woven into the entire tapestry. Very much enjoyed reading your well written tale, and am happy for your win with Emile. Congrats and hugs ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Big Congratulations, Dear Jan. And I do hope you are feeling better today!
Pinet Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations Jan! Your fun-filled poem earned a distinguished place in my onomatopoeia contest, well done my friend, Emile.
Skelly Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 2:15 AM
Jan, Great fun to read...Delice
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Thanks Delice:-) hugs jan xx
Koplin Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:20 PM
Righteous ink my friend, I like how you fitted a fart into the works! Awesome!!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:22 PM
you know me well lol:-) I couldn't resist including a farting sheepdog lol:-) hugs jan xx
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October 24, 2021 at 3:38 PM
That’s marvellous Jan, clever and amusing, well done… Belle :-) xx
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Thanks Belle I hope Emile likes it, it took quite a while to write:-) hugs Jan xx
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October 24, 2021 at 12:38 PM
This really is a great poem Jan, you fit all the words in so cleverly, and keep faithful to your inimitable wit, I really enjoyed the read, all the best in contest, cheers David
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Thanks David, i am amazed by the amount of comments:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Clever! Enjoyed!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 11:27 AM
thanks Rico i am thrilled by the number of comments!:-) hugs Jan xx
Calasibetta Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Hi Jan, you are so creative~a farm filled with fun! Good luck on the contest! Blessings, Paulette
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Paulette, I have learned so so much since i joined the site:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 7:17 AM
A truly delicious onomatopoeic serving, Jan. You have done an excellent job, but I'm not surprised! I'll have to come visit your farm one of these days :) :) Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Thanks Paul i hope Emile likes my effort I am thrilled to get so many comments:-) hugs Jan xx
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Move over ‘old Macdonald’, your farm’s been requisitioned. Well done, Jan. All the best in the contest. Terry
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 8:15 AM
thanks Terry it was such fun to write and I am thrilled at so many comments!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Delaney Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Really fun farm poem, Jan: The sounds really bring the barnyard to life. SuZ
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Thanks Suz, it was such fun to write and i am amazed its had so many comments already:-) hugs jan xx
Pandit Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 4:47 AM
Sights and sounds of your poem evoke life on the farm. Each stanza-- an apt voice in onomatopoeia, Jan. All the best.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Thanks for your lovey comment Vijay:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 4:38 AM
You've accomplished writing a wonderful story using many required words of onomatopoeia. Well done, Jan!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thanks Jenna, i couldnt resist the Old Mcdonald had a farm song too lol:-) hugs jan xx
Jones Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 3:22 AM
Jan this was delightful and for sure a winner. Good luck in the contest!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:06 AM
I hope the sponsor likes it karen:-) hugs jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Fantastic poem, Jan. Hugs.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:05 AM
Thanks Victor, it was fun to write:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 12:24 AM
Great use of the sounding words, Jan, good job the sheep dog was outside lol Tom
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:05 AM
lol you know me and farty poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Laurie Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 8:59 PM
G'day Jan ... life on the farm is great, and it should be mentioned that the same chores go on day after day - thanks Jan - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:05 AM
My parents had a small holding I know what hard work goes into dealing with the animals and cultivating the land:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 7:19 PM
This is really a classic, Jan! So well executed... In fact, your humor just slays me. ~ Laughing so hard, I can't breathe... :) gw
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:04 AM
I couldnt resist the farting sheepdog lol, oh the sounds and scents of the farm lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Kingston Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 7:14 PM
I can't wait to read this to my husband because he grew up on a farm. He will enjoy it so much. I did too. Moo!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:04 AM
Thanks Marikate, I wonder if he can relate to the flatulent sheepdog lol:-) hugs jan xx
Horsman Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 7:01 PM
Wow, Jan this is superb in so many ways. LOve it. Good luck.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:03 AM
Thanks so much Harry:-) I so appreciate all your support:-) hugs jan xx
Hankins Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 6:02 PM
This is such a fun poem, worthy of the recognition. Good luck in Emile's contest.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:02 AM
Thanks Milton, i hope Emile likes, it it took a long time to get it ready to post:-) hugs jan xx
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