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On the Crest of a Wave

Sometimes, sailing in ebony blades of saturnine seas brings forth a forsaken froth of scarred reveries, when musk-ochre tints of sunshine cease to slice through solemn scarlet skies and cruelly-coloured black-pearls shimmer as an obsidian beacon of forest-green intentions, caging pantoums of peace in glass-jars of bleeding sandalwood-scented butterflies, entrapped in sapphire patterns. My spirit is often ablaze as a crematory where opal-gold truths are buried eight feet under the raven crusts, and I rise as feathery-flames in hot-bronze furnaces of diamond-dragon's chauvinistic cave, so that heart's papier- mâché cells never sacrifice their rosemary plasma to eagle-edged egoes and noiseless yet suffocating sonatas of narcissistic nestled woodpeckers. I believe, life is wistful like wilderness of a white-wolf, growling besides midnight's brim and howling to the carmine moon, wrapping peach-sunsets of serenity in fluid-time, unfolding scattered shades of sonorously rustling foliages, shimmering in breezes of crumbling claret twigs and satin seedlings whining to the list of traitors, for their unborn lavender buds. So, swear not under the afterglows of august skies and let me float on the crest of azure waves, in my snowflake-capsule, being immortally evanescent, As every promise is like a betraying magenta melody of crepuscular youth, fading in forged futuristic pastels.

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Date: 1/15/2024 3:12:00 PM
Your words surf the wave and will do so for a long time. Your spirit shines in beautiful colors.
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Date: 12/5/2023 3:33:00 AM
Dear Hiya. Hello. Please allow me to let your most extraordinary entry stand. There is nothing I could add and I would never take this apart. It is well thought out in its entirety starting with your beautiful title to which you did not stray. You obviously are a skilled writer. It was an honor turning to your page and entry. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Peace and Blessings (smile) - Just Beautiful poetry...
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Date: 9/25/2023 8:22:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win my contest with this brilliant write, Hiya:-) You're incredibly gifted!
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Date: 9/4/2023 3:19:00 PM
Fantastic images so colorful. Congrats on the win
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Date: 9/4/2023 3:18:00 PM
Fantastic images so colorful. Congrats on the win
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Date: 9/3/2023 11:02:00 PM
Congratulations!!! Well deserved win: im so happy to see your here in winners list
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Date: 9/3/2023 5:19:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Hiya on your well deserved 1st place award. You are a poet of great merit and an asset to Poetry Soup's crown. Best wishes from SV
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Date: 9/3/2023 8:29:00 AM
Excellent metaphoric lines penned in this one. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. I appreciate the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2023 8:03:00 PM
I can't even get through this as a reader without drowning in the imagery... How can you possibly write it! Amazing, your talent, Hiya!!
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Date: 8/26/2023 9:11:00 PM
Wow.... I am riding on the crest of waves of widening dimensions of seamless emotions. Your poem is woven so skillfully with a plethora of catchy images and expressions! Some of the phrases and epithets you have used are matchless and unique....! Can any other artist draw 'the musk ochre tints of sunshine', carmine moon, peach sunsets' etc with more brilliance than you have done. To effect brevity.... I shall simply say- SUPERB!
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Date: 8/26/2023 3:52:00 PM
Wow, From exuberant bustling phrases to somber scenes, this is a splendorous poem that excites the senses and calms the mind all at once! Write on dear poet!
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Date: 8/26/2023 11:51:00 AM
Beautiful poem with imagery and commanding linguistic skill. Great one--Hiya.
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Date: 8/26/2023 9:10:00 AM
A poem buoyant on symphony of emotions-- weaved skillfully-- emanating from jeweled phrases and melodies. Splendid, as always, Hiya.
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Date: 8/26/2023 8:23:00 AM
Oh my angelic star! What a most poignant and heartfelt write this is, i felt so much as i read this very introspective and thoughtful write that delves deep into the depths of darkest edges, where life has always proven to be nothing but a confusion, and those sonatas of narcissists can be too overwhelming, challenging too. I love your imagery, descriptive language, and the word pairings colors and sumptuous metaphors! Truly an impeccable write
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Date: 8/26/2023 5:57:00 AM
This piece is an exquisite manifestation of poetic brilliance. It is adorned with a multitude of enchanting verses, each meticulously crafted to create a tapestry of breathtaking imagery. The words effortlessly weave together vibrant hues, intricate textures, captivating landscapes, and evocative emotions. Your skillful command of the pen showcases a profound thinker, one whose poetry emanates from the depths of a passionate heart and a soul rich with wisdom.
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Date: 8/26/2023 5:47:00 AM
Never liked narcissistic nestled woodpeckers. Ha! Seriously though this is an awesome entry. Full of colors, textures, landscapes and feelings. I'm happy to be the first to comment on this gem
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