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Pick-A-Title, Vol 38 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 08/25/2023

On the Crest of a Wave

We live sailing 
for making a living,
fisherrmen we are,
leaving our lives in the hands
of Mrs. Luck.

We cross the oceans
all over the world for fishing,
surviving for another bet 
in a harsh life.

Our boats are often 
on the crest of the waves.
A dream for a surfer,
a nightmare for the fishermen.
Big challenge for sailors
and  big enjoyment
with a board on the beach.

We all feel together,
while loneliness
runs through our mind.

We are sailing back home
after months away,
feeling happy,  but alone.

Surrounded by a cold, deep ocean,
we just celebrate our return,
the days out and a good catch.

We can' t wait to hug 
our people waiting for us.
Our loved ones, 
that live with the fear and the doubt
in their bones about seeing us again.

We have to be strong instead,
for us and for them,
showing them the happyness
we don't have, being as far
as frightened 
on the crest of a wave.

We sail back home,
we are nearly there,
we are happy that this time,
we didn't cross big storms.

We are having a big dinner,
some drinking, and lot of talking.
The dawn light give us a push up,
the seagulls welcome us 
with their squawking flying around.

We can see the harbour,
we make a toast to celebrate
that we reached our land,
after being for months
fishing on the crest of a wave
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Ibeh Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 4:24 AM
Remarkable write, Maria:-) I enjoyed it tremendously. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 6:13 AM
Hello Edward. Thank you so much for passing by and leaving this nice comment. Thank you also for giving us the opportunity to keep on writing. Have a geat day!
Bowring Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Such a lovely poem Maria that took us on a journey with the fishermen. Love,’ on the crest of waves’. You made it so easy to visualise and I’m glad they all returned home safely to their loved ones!Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Hello Christina. Thank you so much for your nice comment. Sometimes they come but others they don't. The fisherman deserved to be written for. You are welcome and thank you again for passing by. I' m glad you liked it.
Rolland Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 6:34 PM
wonderful hommage to sailors, and fishermen, living in brittany, this poem touchs me particularly$ have a sweet week end
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 1:14 AM
Thank you, Yann. Have a nice weekend you too.
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