On the Coast

Watch the fog roll in Somehow full of mystery Riding a white horse

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James Fraser

Date: 7/23/2009 11:15:00 AM

Lovely Haiku Barbara, fog is a danger - but it also has beauty>>Kool read>>James

Sean Kelly

Date: 7/23/2009 7:55:00 AM

Great call , Barbs , I have seen it many times , here but you have " haiku'd " it perfectly !! ....

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/22/2009 5:21:00 PM

Now that's a wonderful view umm riding a white horse! I love it! Laura :)

John Freeman

Date: 7/22/2009 3:12:00 PM

The fog rode in on a white horse, yes ofcourse, Godbless, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/22/2009 3:00:00 PM

Mail in a moment.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/22/2009 2:56:00 PM

Awesome haiku, LCN! I like the analogy of the approaching fog to the "white horse." You must have a beautiful view of the coast near your home to see images like this. Love, Carolyn

Steve Meadows

Date: 7/22/2009 2:03:00 PM

good haiku