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Ink, you haunt ghastly night like tangled web ~ needling my fingers on blank of pages: Knotted lines dangle through mind’s labyrinth until words pour ~ from cracked quill spilling blots Broken Wings’ Form T Contest ~ Double Tetractys, 2nd stanza inverted 8/23/2017

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2017 12:44:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Kash Poet

Date: 9/9/2017 4:24:00 AM

Beautiful!

Cindi Rockwell

Date: 9/8/2017 9:40:00 AM

Very good. Not a form I'm familiar with but it drew me in and held me captive. Thank you!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/31/2017 8:55:00 PM

I wish you good luck in the contest. have a nice evening my friend.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 8/26/2017 1:25:00 PM

Great job Nette. Good luck in the contest. I should hurry but no ideas yet.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/25/2017 12:43:00 AM

Wow! Amazing job, Nette, a sure winner:)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/23/2017 8:23:00 PM

This is awesome, Nette! Such a wonderful description. Good luck in the contest.

Barry Stebbings

Date: 8/23/2017 3:54:00 PM

Seems to be a few left hander's around, (me too). I wonder if it goes with writing poetry? I can relate this. // Barry.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2017 1:05:00 PM

- A problem for all of us who are left handed, Nette - Excellent poem :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2017 7:00:00 AM

I can relate to this so much Nette great theme for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/23/2017 6:28:00 AM

A writer's thoughts well depicted--love the artwork and design--good work and good luck nette!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/23/2017 5:50:00 AM

I hate it when pens start pilling in blots on a paper! Almost as painful as when I write (I'm left handed) my hand smudges the ink on the page! But your poem does not smudge nor does it blot in any way! It is a wonderfully written, masterfully produced work of art! I really enjoyed reading your delightful poem this morning! Thank you for enlightening me with a grandiose piece of your pen! Great Work my friend!!