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On Tangled Web

Ink, 
you haunt 
ghastly night
like tangled web ~ 
needling my fingers on blank of pages:

Knotted  lines dangle through mind’s labyrinth 
until  words  pour ~
from cracked quill 
spilling
blots



Broken Wings’ Form T Contest
~ Double Tetractys, 2nd stanza inverted
8/23/2017

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2017

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Eve Roper Date: 9/9/2017 12:44:00 PM Nette, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 9/9/2017 4:24:00 AM Beautiful! Login to Reply

Cindi Rockwell Date: 9/8/2017 9:40:00 AM Very good. Not a form I'm familiar with but it drew me in and held me captive. Thank you! Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 8/31/2017 8:55:00 PM I wish you good luck in the contest. have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/26/2017 1:25:00 PM Great job Nette. Good luck in the contest. I should hurry but no ideas yet. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/25/2017 12:43:00 AM Wow! Amazing job, Nette, a sure winner:) Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 8/23/2017 8:23:00 PM This is awesome, Nette! Such a wonderful description. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Barry Stebbings Date: 8/23/2017 3:54:00 PM Seems to be a few left hander's around, (me too). I wonder if it goes with writing poetry? I can relate this. // Barry. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2017 1:05:00 PM - A problem for all of us who are left handed, Nette - Excellent poem :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/23/2017 7:00:00 AM I can relate to this so much Nette great theme for the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/23/2017 6:28:00 AM A writer's thoughts well depicted--love the artwork and design--good work and good luck nette! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 8/23/2017 5:50:00 AM I hate it when pens start pilling in blots on a paper! Almost as painful as when I write (I'm left handed) my hand smudges the ink on the page! But your poem does not smudge nor does it blot in any way! It is a wonderfully written, masterfully produced work of art! I really enjoyed reading your delightful poem this morning! Thank you for enlightening me with a grandiose piece of your pen! Great Work my friend!! Login to Reply