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On Surreal Wings

Through the slightly parted drapes Moon light enters my bed room, To chase darkness away Everything is still and silent I drive all my anxieties away, Letting the silence of the night in So fair is the night, So lovely lies the firmament I see the moon, stars and galaxies All luminously set on display The universe brims with the enormity Of unfathomable wonders and mysteries I see God the mastermind behind them all Dwelling in that serene silence of solitude A deific discernment dawns in me, With the affirmation that the universe And everything in it is a single living entity Shackled by the unbreakable thread of love..... And all men of caste and color, one single tribe! Soon a vibrant blissfulness overwhelms me I levitate on wings surreal Leaving the mundane world behind Feb.22. 2022 Vibrant Blissful Stillness Poetry Contest Sponsor- Unseeking Seeker

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/28/2022 10:55:00 AM

Valsa, this is truly a "fair" and "lovely" poem radiating the stillness and peace of a moonlit night. You have such a wonderful way of using words to express not only your poem's theme but the setting of your experience. Thank you for inviting all of us to share that scene of pure serenity as "one tribe." Congratulations and many blessings.

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/27/2022 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations! on your trophy win, I'm so happy for you my friend as your writings are always "Outstanding". I look forward to see more cups in that list. Hugs ~ Debra

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/25/2022 6:04:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win friend! Beautiful as usual!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2022 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "I see God the mastermind behind them all." Have a great/blessed day with your wonderful win..................

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/25/2022 11:20:00 AM

I am happy to see this beauty win a trophy for you Valsa. Congratulations! This is wonderful. Blessings xxoo

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 2/25/2022 9:54:00 AM

You have won!! congratulations! Made me very happy! but pondering if it is " unfathomable wonders and mysteries....unbreakable thread of love.....And all men of caste and color, one single tribe!..vibrant blissfulness overwhelms me...etc" then why world becomes mundane and you are leaving? Amused me a little! But nice as always Valsa. - Marshall

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/25/2022 7:58:00 AM

Congratulations! On wings surreal, blissful, Valsa. Have a great weekend

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 2/25/2022 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your trophy win, Valsa! Such a great write - profound and eternal! Love and blessings ~ Mala

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/25/2022 6:33:00 AM

Hi Valsa, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/25/2022 4:51:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end... especially the line: "I see God the mastermind behind them all." God bless you.

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/25/2022 4:23:00 AM

Wondrous win, Valsa, with your simple arrangement empowered by your drafted words my friend, Aloha~William!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 2/25/2022 3:59:00 AM

That is indeed a lovely poem, congrats!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/25/2022 3:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Valsa! “Shackled by the unbreakable thread of love..... And all men of caste and color, one single tribe!”

Valsa George
Date: 2/25/2022 4:43:00 AM

I feel greatly honored ! For the first time, I see my name figuring at the top. Feel humbled.... Thanks a lot dear Seeker friend ! I wrote this mostly inspired by your writes

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/24/2022 6:02:00 AM

I see your faith in this one "I see God the mastermind behind them all"

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/22/2022 4:12:00 PM

A lovely thought discerned. :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/22/2022 10:28:00 AM

And whilst you are doing that, your neighbours spend their brain power designing new weapons, new scams, new ideas to make their life an adventure . . . .

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/22/2022 7:30:00 AM

Wow!Valsa, You composed such a well-written poem on the contest theme. Your poem expressed a profound peace. I liked the line "I levitate on surreal wings'. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/22/2022 5:05:00 AM

Your poem explores the ultimate peace and eternal bliss--elusive to to many. Well written, as always, Valsa.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/22/2022 2:53:00 AM

Excellent verse. One can never stop admiring the shine and twinkling of the ever expanding universe. Our God is omnipotent indeed.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/22/2022 12:10:00 AM

In the peace of the night we reflect on the wonders of creation that God has given us. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/21/2022 9:22:00 PM

Unbelievable. Awesome and profound Valsa my friend. Hope you are well. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/21/2022 7:46:00 PM

Valsa, you've done it again with another excellent piece of writing. This poetry was really well written, and I thoroughly liked reading it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.