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On Mountain Nine

Running beauty rippled in crystal white No whisper in the air, just a wondrous sight My eyes ascend in awe to a far light Small and empty observing such a height Nature in colours captured in delight Ready to be filled with bliss and insight Melt in silence, a faint soul to excite Drifted with music, poem to recite My thoughts wrapped into words and put aside My fancies are now poised set for a flight A heart into throbbing beauty subsides The summit I can reach and meet my fright Exultant to feel not gems but a mine Yearning to have peace seeds sown deep inside Sweet lyrics bring my very soul to life Soft music tunes me to mountain nine.

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/24/2018 6:30:00 AM

Your beautiful Mountain Nine takes me up to Cloud Nine or Seventh Heaven, Besma! Awesome imagery and musical monorhyme combine to cast a spell on the reader. Thank you for taking me to the summit with you! This is worthy of a fav, my friend. ~ Warm regards and blessings // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/25/2018 4:27:00 AM

That's my utmost aspiration.. to have my humble words touch and enchant my avid readers hearts and souls.. I am very happy, Paul, you are enthralled by my monorhyme on Mountain Nine! Deeply humbled.. thank you so much for your honourable presence and generous appreciation! My deepest regards and warmest wishes. God bless you.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/4/2018 6:11:00 PM

Hello Besma, your poem is beautifully written. I felt like I was at that scene in your poem. have a nice evening my friend.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/5/2018 2:49:00 PM

I'm grateful to you dear Darlene for your beautiful and cheering feedback! A pleasure to have you on my page. Have a nice time.. best regards.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/2/2018 11:33:00 PM

Congratulations my dear friend. Your soul has soared up to great heights many times, you recognize this and soar higher and even higher every time'! Tell me where to find mountain nine and the serenity, tranquility and peace one can receive from it. Again imagery is so intense - an exquisite write, Love and hug Jennifer

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/3/2018 3:50:00 PM

Dearest Jennifer, you are showering me with the utmost beauty of comment a soul and a work of art can aspire to have.. a poet and a reader rise together in Beauty! Thank you so much soul sister for your kindness and beauty, love and hugs.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/21/2018 7:00:00 AM

This is uniquely beautiful in that you have captured the heights to which the soul soars with music and lyrics. Those "peace seeds" we all need and if music doesn't provide it than this poem certainly does. Had to "fav" this one.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/24/2018 2:44:00 PM

Thank you so much M.L. Kiser for the read and the fav. Always an honour and a pleasure to have your generous feedbacks on my page.. my deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Silent One

Date: 11/19/2018 4:32:00 PM

Great monorhyme... poem flows very well..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/20/2018 10:16:00 AM

Grateful to you Silent One for honouring my humble poem! A great pleasure to see you on my page with your so appreciated comments. My deepest regards.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/18/2018 1:12:00 AM

Ah, I want to visit "mountain nine"; wonderful flow and imagery here; well done. I too want, "peace seeds" sewn into me. Love that, "peace seeds".

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/20/2018 10:12:00 AM

You have already done! Thank you so much M.L. Kiser for appreciating and praising my humble poem! Honoured and humbled. Best regards.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/13/2018 10:27:00 PM

I love how you express, beautiful, and of course congrats!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/20/2018 10:09:00 AM

Your genuine words do honour my humble write Arthur.. thank you so much for your honourable visit and generous comment. My deepest regards.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/13/2018 6:27:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/20/2018 10:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim! Always a great pleasure having you on my page! Deeply humbled and honoured.. stay blessed always.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/12/2018 12:45:00 AM

Excellent poem my friend Besma. Well penned with great imagery and rhyme. Congratulations on POTD. Enjoyed reading it

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/20/2018 10:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Ravi! I do appreciate your visits and feedbacks.. my honour and great delight! Be blessed always.

Maria Williams

Date: 11/10/2018 5:52:00 AM

Your sweet lyrics have brought my Soul to Life Besma my dear friend. What wonderful imagery your words paint. I am so sorry I missed wishing you earlier on POTD, but please accept my belated congratulations. So well deserved on this gem....Maria hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/10/2018 6:16:00 AM

Dearest friend Maria, your overflowing love, beauty, appreciation and positive vibes I do always feel.. your sweet and beautiful soul always reigns on PS! Never feel guilty for not being able to share happy moments.. always add beauty to pain.. understanding, trust and love is the answer.. I'm always happy to see you, hear and read beauty from you.. thank you so much for sharing my joy and honouring me.. love.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/9/2018 7:24:00 PM

Dearest Besma, your awe-inspiring imagery ignites my imagination and takes your ardent reader with you to this divine place of inspiration where peace seeds are sown deep inside - so breathtaking.. and sweet lyrics bring your enriched soul to life on a softly tuneful path of poetry. Beautiful is your bliss and your thoughts wrapped into words, that your loving heart so generously shares. Congratulations for your wonderful and well deserved recognition of POTD honors for your exquisite poem. Warmest wishes, love and hugs always my lovely friend.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/10/2018 6:05:00 AM

Warmth, love, appreciation, beauty.. and much more I do feel into my heart right now while reading your honouring and rewarding poetic and heartfelt words! That's my reward.. that's my honour and recognition! When an ardent reader of your grandeur and beauty feels my humble words. I'm on mountain nine with glee.. always grateful to you dearest Susan.. love and hugs.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/8/2018 10:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful poem being honored POTD Besma! : )

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2018 6:33:00 AM

Your feedback is wonderful dear Connie! Honouring, elating and uplifting! I can't thank you enough for your beauty and generosity.. warmest wishes..

Eve Roper

Date: 11/8/2018 9:48:00 PM

Fantastic poem, Besma, great imagery and rhyme. Congratulations on POTD

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2018 6:22:00 AM

My dearest Eve, you honour me with your gracious visit and beautiful appreciative feedback! Bunches of thanks.. my warmest wishes.. shine in the beauty of poetry!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/8/2018 6:39:00 PM

Words take flight, gracefully so- as moments have wings. I know this feeling. :) You paint such vivid images. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Besma, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2018 6:17:00 AM

A poetess of Beauty does feel my humble words! Your kind words gracefully sashay into my heart! Thank you so much Brandy for being here to read, appreciate and congratulate.. deeply humbled dear.. looking forward to reading your beauties.. be blessed always.

Mark Elam

Date: 11/8/2018 3:33:00 PM

Congratulations! Well crafted.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2018 6:08:00 AM

Honoured and delighted by your praising feedback Mark.. thank you so much.. deepest regards.

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/8/2018 11:46:00 AM

Well done Besma, congratulations on POTD honors...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2018 6:06:00 AM

Your gracious visit I highly value Charlie.. thank you so much for your lovely compliments.. My deepest regards.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 11/8/2018 9:59:00 AM

Congratulations!!! Very uplifting!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2018 6:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Sunlite, my pleasure! You honour me! My best regards.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/8/2018 9:24:00 AM

Hi Besma, I have often written to Robert, that somewhere somehow he must be related to Shakespeare - his poems are overwhelming, as are yours Besma! Love Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2018 6:01:00 AM

How beautiful is your soul! How flowing is your love! How sweet are your words! A poetess of stunning humility and generosity you are dear Jennifer! I cherish every drop of ink you leak to Praise and honour my humble poetry.. thank you so much dear, my warmest wishes.. love and hugs.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/8/2018 9:22:00 AM

A very positive and uplifting piece for me to have found and read this morn. Your superb verses sing to uplift this tired heart my dear friend. Huge congratulations on this gem being chosen as POTD... A fav....

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2018 5:51:00 AM

Your honourable presence and wonderful comment from a poetic heart tune my humble verses to Beauty! Thank you so much Robert.. your sincere compliments I highly treasure.. thrive on the blessings of God.. deepest regards..

Jay Moore

Date: 11/8/2018 9:12:00 AM

Congrats, Beautifully written

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/8/2018 6:55:00 PM

My delight, Jay.. thank you so much you honour my humble write. Best regards.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 11/8/2018 8:39:00 AM

Lovely piece! Congratulations on POTD Besma! :) xomo

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/8/2018 5:36:00 PM

My honour and pleasure Maureen.. thank you so much for your gracious presence and beautiful feedback.. Be blessed always.

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/8/2018 7:25:00 AM

Back to congrats!!! my dear poetic sister on your POTD!...love & light...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/8/2018 5:31:00 PM

I'm overwhelmed with your beauty and generosity Winged Warrior.. I'm blessed to have a highly talented poet on my path of poetry encouraging and appreciating my humble words.. thank you so much. My deepest regards.

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/8/2018 6:55:00 AM

Very rhythmic...full of joy too... I like it...Congratulations...All the best to you Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/8/2018 5:24:00 PM

Nice to see you on my page Arturo.. thank you so much for granting me precious a time to read and honour my work.. my deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Joseph May

Date: 11/8/2018 6:45:00 AM

Wonderful write Besma...Congrats on POTD..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/8/2018 5:20:00 PM

Wonderful is your feedback Joseph! You honour my humble write! Thank you so much. Best regards.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/8/2018 6:16:00 AM

Awesome poetry, Besma. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. Charlie

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/8/2018 5:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Charles for your genuine praise! I do appreciate your visit and comment.. my pleasure and honour. Best regards.