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On Jungle Grass

There on the brown jungle grass We lie hemmed by moonlit horse Deep sounds of drum from afar Babylon breath dense and coarse ____________________________ 23 March, 2017 [Qijue - 4 lines, 7 syllables each] Contest: Form ‘J’ Jueju Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 4/3/2017 4:19:00 PM
This verges on the original, Probir. I enjoyed the imagery and the Babylon reference. Congrats on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/3/2017 11:22:00 PM
Thank you ... and regards ...
Date: 4/3/2017 12:20:00 PM
Probir, you used some very creative imagery. Congrats on your great win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim ...
Date: 4/2/2017 7:45:00 PM
Great imagery, Probir and a unique entry. Congrats for your win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/3/2017 5:17:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea for the appreciation ...
Date: 4/2/2017 4:25:00 PM
Probir congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju that is very thought provoking~
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Date: 4/3/2017 5:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance ... A joy to be in your contest ...
Date: 3/29/2017 12:55:00 PM
I like the drum image especially. Not sure what Babylon breath could mean but something eerie and foreboding. Nice jueju, a 7.
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Date: 4/1/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thank you much ... What can it mean if I say I am now in a Babylonian age ...
Date: 3/25/2017 5:57:00 AM
Hello Probir. I read your words twice to soak it all in. I'm impressed with your expressions and thought not to mention the entry's title. Best of luck with the contest. Well done
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Date: 3/25/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Lisa ... Once you feel the Babylon breath, and of course there is no reason you won't , you are likely to like the figures ... success in contest is something else ...
Date: 3/24/2017 9:33:00 PM
Fabulous four lines. GL in the contest.
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Date: 3/25/2017 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for the encouraging assessment, Janis ...
Date: 3/24/2017 10:34:00 AM
Fabulous my friend, Probir. A mystic writing. I have got problems with my computer!
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Date: 3/25/2017 9:54:00 AM
Sorry for the delayed reply ... I couldn't come yesterday ... Yeah, mystic it is if you mean symbolic ... Thank you ...

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