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On Jesus' Birthday - Haiku

On Jesus’ Birthday Gifts He does not ask While we get all the presents All He wants is us by Jean McLoughlin

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/31/2016 7:17:00 AM

Truth so profound expressed in simple words. Great!

Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/31/2016 8:23:00 AM

thank you so much for reading Jo and for your kind words. Best wishes, from Jean

Vincent Flannery

Date: 1/13/2016 2:09:00 PM

So true, all He wants is us! So much said in just one little haiku. God Bless.

Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/13/2016 3:05:00 PM

Oh thank you Vincent, and thank God for all the wonderful gifts He gives us. Blessings. Jean

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/9/2016 3:41:00 AM

Neatly done Jean! A point well taken... Best wishes, Keith

Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/9/2016 5:25:00 AM

Thank you Keith, you're very kind. Blessings. Jean

Susan Walker

Date: 1/8/2016 3:32:00 PM

Nice..

Jean Mcloughlin
Date: 1/8/2016 3:36:00 PM

Thanks Susan