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On Ice (Footle)

Fall down New Frown Or Fall down Now Clown

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Michael Jordan

Date: 2/7/2009 10:48:00 AM

You cracked me up with this one Michael - I am one who is prone to get his clown on with people - Great job - God Bless, MJ

Date: 2/7/2009 9:07:00 AM

Got a good chuckle out of this one. Life is a matter of perspective isn't it. Thanks for the day brightener! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/7/2009 7:44:00 AM

Cute.....this would describe me on ice skates....such a klutz!! (or is it clutz???) :) Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 2/7/2009 7:33:00 AM

Like the second one best Michael.Rgds Brian

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 2/7/2009 6:27:00 AM

I'm waiting too LOL.. Nice

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/7/2009 6:00:00 AM

Great stuff..........pick up. Déirdre

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/7/2009 5:59:00 AM

Good job with this piece.

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/7/2009 4:43:00 AM

Large Cut .... On Butt ..... Please don't tell me to put some ice on it , Michael !! Great double footle .....