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On Fire

Her lips on fire
His kisses extinguisher 
Flames both consumed!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
   28 OCTOBER 2014

lovepassionromancehaiku

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 1:12:00 PM

Yes what Andrea said this poem is on fire!!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/29/2014 4:17:00 PM

Then you too do not come closer! Ha-ha! Thank you , mon ami, Richard, very kind of you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2014 12:46:00 AM

whewwww, that poem is ON FIRE!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/29/2014 6:56:00 AM

My dear, Andrea, do not come closer! Thank you though for your lovely visit and comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2014 6:43:00 PM

this is HOT HOT HOT - great write my friend:-) hugs jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/29/2014 6:49:00 AM

Stay away dear, Jan, you may be set aflame! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a nice way!Hugs

David Meade

Date: 10/28/2014 4:32:00 PM

I see no smoke only the purifying fire of love and passion. I liked the play of "her" and "extinguisher" . . . well written! All the best.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/28/2014 4:38:00 PM

Welcome, David! Thank you for your kind visit and comment!

Cindy Cayton

Date: 10/28/2014 3:50:00 PM

and your heart burning... :) Well writ!!! :) Cindy

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/28/2014 4:40:00 PM

Dear, Cindy, welcome! It is very kind of you to visit and comment. The heart burns all the time!

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 10/28/2014 11:48:00 AM

Are you sure it cann be distinguished? haha. Enjoyed, Demetrios :)

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 10/28/2014 12:58:00 PM

Lol

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/28/2014 12:06:00 PM

No, it cannot be , that is why both are consumed by fire!

Toquyen Harrell
Date: 10/28/2014 11:58:00 AM

Extinguished, my friend. That's the word lol

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/28/2014 11:57:00 AM

Toquyen, how lovely to see you after long time! To answer your question I have to be an expert on such matters and an expert I am not! Thank you for visiting and commenting my dear friend!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/28/2014 11:15:00 AM

Ah, such a sweet poem Demetrios

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/28/2014 11:56:00 AM

Well congratulations! A beautiful 500th. Your dear wife must be charmed.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/28/2014 11:43:00 AM

Thank you, Brenda my friend! I just wanted to celebrate my 500th poem!

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/28/2014 11:15:00 AM

A sizzler, Demetrios, my friend! You got me all worked up and at my age, that could be dangerous! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/28/2014 11:41:00 AM

Jack? Is that you? Is it true that Zeus descended from His Olympus throne to visit a mere mortal? What an honor! I have missed your visits my friend! Thank you so much for your precious visit and comment! WHAT age? You are young in perpetuity thus I do not worry for you have been through...worse situations and have survived therefore 17 syllables wouldn't do any harm! Ha-ha!