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On Fertile Ground

On Fertile Ground (A Settler’s Song of Thanks) We settled here on fertile ground. Trees filled the orchards all around, and fields of crops would soon appear. On fertile ground we settled here. We bought some land – my love and I. Amazed were we by spacious sky from which rains fell; our crops were grand! My love and I – we bought some land. Fruits plump and sweet; gold-ripened corn; our harvest truly was a horn of plenty, with so much to eat: gold-ripened corn; fruits plump and sweet. With thanks much owed, we praised the Lord, and I was proud of my adored who by my side reaped what we sowed. We praised the Lord with thanks much owed. On fertile ground, long-settled here with healthy children, it is clear to this dear land we’re ever bound - long-settled here on fertile ground. Aug. 12, 2021 (this is a form called swap-quatrain) For A Brian Strand Your Choice Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/25/2021 8:25:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea. Very interesting and well written. Blessings.
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Date: 8/25/2021 3:21:00 AM
I like swap quatrains and this is a very good one. Congrats on both wins.
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Date: 8/20/2021 8:08:00 AM
As usual a very beautiful composition. Wonderful Work.
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Date: 8/20/2021 6:59:00 AM
Such an amazing poem, Andrea:-) Loved it! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 8/16/2021 8:48:00 AM
This is so "Iowan" of you! "Fruits plump and sweet; gold-ripened corn; our harvest truly was a horn of plenty, with so much to eat: gold-ripened corn; fruits plump and sweet."
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Date: 8/16/2021 6:27:00 AM
I love this especially verse 3 - its imagery! Have a blessed day :)
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Date: 8/14/2021 8:31:00 AM
Splendid poem!! It resonates with me...looking back to my childhood days....You make me nostalgic dear Andrea!!This will surely score high! All d best.
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Date: 8/13/2021 3:18:00 PM
As always, you tell a story so we’ll. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/13/2021 8:27:00 AM
Andrea, I really like this poem. Your rhythm and rhyme are spot on. I like the last line, "long-settled here of fertile ground.
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Date: 8/13/2021 6:44:00 AM
This is so good Andrea, a lovely rhythm draws the reader in. A pleasure to read..Delice
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Date: 8/13/2021 5:25:00 AM
Enjoyed your write, Andrea. Expertly executed with heartfelt images of your beloved land.
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Date: 8/13/2021 3:48:00 AM
wow you did this brilliantly. I love the rhythm and the cascade of lovely words. You are very talented, I enjoy your poems each time. :)
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Date: 8/13/2021 2:46:00 AM
Lovely write, Andrea... I have never heard of the form swap quatrain... Thanks for sharing... This is a winner for sure...
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Date: 8/13/2021 2:02:00 AM
Beautiful poem on the chosen title, Andrea, love this form and how you excel in it :)
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Date: 8/13/2021 1:23:00 AM
Love this Andrea, and the form. Also i'd like to think the poem goes much deeper, I read a message.
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Date: 8/13/2021 8:28:00 AM
yes, I also implied fertile life if that is what you were thinking!
Date: 8/12/2021 11:36:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful, so well constructed poem. I'm sure you'll get top place. You deserve it. Hugs.
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Date: 8/12/2021 8:38:00 PM
Wow! This is so beautifully-written, Andrea. I love the swap-quatrain concept. I first saw it in one of Emile Pinet's poems. I must give it a try, but I could never measure up to this one! A FAVE for me.
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Date: 8/12/2021 8:05:00 PM
Such a beautiful verse, Andrea, the flow and imagery are fantastic. Good luck. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/12/2021 7:50:00 PM
Now, i must indulge the other poets who have entered this contest...az many az i can until mine dome's lidz cover mine see...i think you got this dear poet...good luck girlie...much love, james
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Date: 8/12/2021 7:29:00 PM
I truly admire the swapping and the melodic tempo, Andrea. I just entered one in Brian's contest that I did a while ago, kinda mixed alliteration form as well, yet yours is much preferred, my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 8/12/2021 7:02:00 PM
Very well-penned quatrain, Andrea, I enjoyed reading this poem, and I like this verse: from which rains fell; our crops were grand! My love and I – we bought some land. I wish you good luck with the contest.
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