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On distant shores we met that day Our lives changed in every way The stars align you always say The time of us is here to stay We didn't know what it could mean On distant shores we met that day To confide in someone sight unseen Sharing has made our lives serene Our time together we appreciate All the ways we can communicate On distant shores we met that day We laugh, share and commiserate Often morning, noon, nighttime too I treasure all my time with you A friendship like ours comes to few On distant shores we met that day June 20, 2018 Robert Haigh's "Distant Shores" Poetry Contest Ninth Place PS describes Quatern as a a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains, similar to the Kyrielle and the Retourne. It has a refrain in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fouth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme. line 1 line 2 line 3 line 4 line 5 line 6 (line 1) line 7 line 8 line 9 line 10 line 11 (line 1) line 12 line 13 line 14 line 15 line 16 (line 1)

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Date: 6/26/2018 10:31:00 AM
Like the form which you have done a great job with. Congratulations.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/27/2018 6:08:00 AM
Thanks so much.
Date: 6/25/2018 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations! This is a beautiful poem.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/25/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Haley!
Date: 6/24/2018 8:29:00 PM
Belated congrats on a much deserved win for this romantic write Susan!~Che :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/24/2018 10:32:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/24/2018 7:43:00 PM
Susan, your poem made my heart swoon. Enjoyed reading it from top to the bottom. Congratulations on your winning creativity. Hugs, Sonia.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/24/2018 10:31:00 PM
Awww thank you so much, Sonia. Such a nice comment. :)
Date: 6/24/2018 3:20:00 PM
This is so sweet, Susan. Congrats for your win.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/24/2018 7:28:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 6/23/2018 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Susan. With this beautiful write of love! All the best...Charlie
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 12:09:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie.
Date: 6/22/2018 3:11:00 PM
I think that the refrain --- on distant sohres we met that day --- works very well structurally, thematically, and most importantly, it MOVED me, (one of)your reader(s)! Glad to see your poems back here again too! :) gw
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 2:27:00 AM
Why thank you! Glad to hear, you made my day! Always glad to see your comments and hear your input. :)
Date: 6/22/2018 7:39:00 AM
Beautiful piece that melted my heart, congrats on your win. Faux
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/23/2018 2:25:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/21/2018 7:41:00 PM
An intriguing romantic write Susan; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/21/2018 11:57:00 PM
Thanks! :)
Date: 6/21/2018 6:48:00 PM
What a lovely flowing poem Susan, Much enjoyed :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/21/2018 11:57:00 PM
Thank you. :)
Date: 6/20/2018 1:08:00 PM
What a nice easy read, good luck in the contest, you should do well
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/21/2018 12:32:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/20/2018 12:50:00 PM
Beautiful romantic verse Susan. Good luck. Tom.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/21/2018 12:32:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 6/20/2018 11:18:00 AM
An enjoyable read, Susan:) What a lucky "friend" Good luck!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/20/2018 11:53:00 AM
Thank you, my friend :)

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