On Display

The rising sun is on display
For anyone to see
Though few are out to notice – 
Just the lucky ones, like me.

The past few days I can’t describe
Its color – like a mix
Of neon pink and orange-red,
A hue that does transfix.

It hangs there in the sky like that
For minutes, that is all – 
A glowing and transcendent orb,
An incandescent ball.

Yet as it inches upward,
All that color changes fast.
Such beauty overpowers;
Seems it isn’t meant to last.

The folks who show up later,
When the sun has drifted high,
Do not realize what they’ve missed
By letting magic pass them by.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Watt Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:50 PM
i've always felt that part of the magic of a sunrise, aside from its splendor, is the sensation that you are the only spectator of the grand exhibition... well done, and big congrats for your potd ~ john
Callus Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 2:05 AM
What a spectacular morning display you offer us, Ilene! It's a pity that many fail to notice these daily gifts of nature! ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award. Regards // paul
Krutsinger Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 7:24 PM
I like the way you made the sun seem like an ornament in the sky, for I also feel this way about her.
Skelly Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 10:43 PM
A Perfectly lovely description of sunrise, beautiful....Delice
Borke Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 1:52 PM
You’re not scared to be alone like that in nyc?
Fenn Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 1:31 PM
So true and sad that so many do not come out to see sunrises! Beautiful lyric!
Nicole Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 12:35 PM
If a few are unable to view the beauty of a sunrise, perhaps they are enjoying a majestic sunset. Both are breathtaking in their own way. This is beautiful and enchanting, all at the same time. Congratulations Ilene, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Kitchin Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Wonderfully done, love the colorful imagery, congratulations on POTD Ilene!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a beautiful write. I love this "On Display." So true, many miss out on the magic when they sleep in. Have a blessed day with your win..............
Alex Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 10:01 AM
God! It's Great! Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 9:35 AM
Wonderful poem and well-deserving of POTD. Congratulations, Ilene!
Wolf Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 9:31 AM
Nice that you enjoy the show at its peak effect in the a.m., ilene... Congrats on POTD! Have a nice weekend! ~ Sunrise Sam
Seeker Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Blink and you miss it, same holds true for each pulse! Congrats on POTD, ilene! Beautiful write indeed
Peck Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 8:07 AM
A beautiful poem. Congratulations on POTD!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Wonderful poem Ilene! Congratulations on POTD! xomo
Sands Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on this beautiful POTD :)
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 6:51 AM
Dropping back with many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 5:43 AM
A vividly descriptive poem, Ilene! Beautiful! Congrats on your POTD honor! Blessings, Kim M
Lawless Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 5:37 AM
Ilene, you're making the sun blush....or maybe just describing the sun's blush. Great job
Edmonds  Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 5:35 AM
A wonderful poem Ilene that describes the beauty of the rising sun, breath taking in it’s radiance as day has just begun. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
La France Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Ilene, beautiful poem, that is why I like to get up very early, for views like your poem and for the silence and the tweets of birds. Congratulations on receiving a deserving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~ love and serenity _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 4:56 AM
Beautiful. I love this. God bless you and CONGRATS on POTD. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 4:24 AM
A beauty indeed! Congratulations on POTD!
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 3:27 AM
You have described sunrise so beautifully that I want to get up early and watch it. It is magical indeed. Once rains are over in India, I too can watch sunrise. Your last para so true. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour and day
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 2:33 AM
Congratulations ilene on your magically crafted potd, with a fine moral, it’s Human nature perhaps, only to miss somethings when gone or too late, cheers David
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