On Dark Dying Sunless Beams I Went To Wait

On Dark Dying Sunless Beams I Went To Wait

Destined to be valor was a granite block
World had no idea what lay ahead;
Intuition was dreamed, I lay in bed,
Even to this soul, my power became a shock!
Yet you my darling in your blinding light
Why on weeping earth did you race to leave?
Gifting dire lonesome sifted through a seeve
As your comet fled into dark of crying night.

In your lost paradise you call my name
But I vanished away into a galactic herd
You then fell like a perishing little redbird
And sad truth was nobody won that sick game.

On dark dying sunless beams I went to wait.
While you lived sad, eating only your deep hate.

Robert J. Lindley, sonnet
Jan 5th 1976
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 10, 2023 at 7:02 PM
Truly, exquisitely crafted. I express my gratitude for this exquisite poem, brimming with profound insights and culminating in a resounding conclusion. This going straight to my fave. Amidst dim, fading rays devoid of sunlight, I embarked on a patient vigil. As you endured a melancholic existence, nourishing solely on the bitterness of your profound animosity.
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August 10, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Sometimes a great love goes bad , and if it does it is a most terrible destructive vengeance wrecked upon one of the victims. She mistakenly punished me until that almost destroyed her.
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August 10, 2023 at 7:06 PM
Thank you, my good friend. I appreciate your insightful verse filled comment and the fav as well. God bless you. Robert
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