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On Dark Dying Sunless Beams I Went To Wait

On Dark Dying Sunless Beams I Went To Wait Destined to be valor was a granite block World had no idea what lay ahead; Intuition was dreamed, I lay in bed, Even to this soul, my power became a shock! Yet you my darling in your blinding light Why on weeping earth did you race to leave? Gifting dire lonesome sifted through a seeve As your comet fled into dark of crying night. In your lost paradise you call my name But I vanished away into a galactic herd You then fell like a perishing little redbird And sad truth was nobody won that sick game. On dark dying sunless beams I went to wait. While you lived sad, eating only your deep hate. Robert J. Lindley, sonnet Jan 5th 1976

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Date: 8/10/2023 7:02:00 PM
Truly, exquisitely crafted. I express my gratitude for this exquisite poem, brimming with profound insights and culminating in a resounding conclusion. This going straight to my fave. Amidst dim, fading rays devoid of sunlight, I embarked on a patient vigil. As you endured a melancholic existence, nourishing solely on the bitterness of your profound animosity.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/10/2023 7:10:00 PM
Sometimes a great love goes bad , and if it does it is a most terrible destructive vengeance wrecked upon one of the victims. She mistakenly punished me until that almost destroyed her.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/10/2023 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, my good friend. I appreciate your insightful verse filled comment and the fav as well. God bless you. Robert

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