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On a Wave of Fantasy

I drank an overdose of ale The bubbly liquid left me intoxicated It took me away on a wave of fantasy I levitated and flew to the galaxies All my possessions I left behind It was an exciting nocturnal odyssey Clouds of myriad patterns brushed past me In the silence and seclusion of the sky All I sought was the lovely face of my 'Eurydice' All I desired was to hold her hand Could we gyrate in an immortal rhythm To be forever an Orpheus and Eurydice I held firm to her hand Through the dark alleys I raced Never looking back, even when fear plagued me I was eager to leave behind the world of the dead Reaching a safe spot, I looked behind Where is my 'Eurydice'? Had she disappeared into thin air? Like a gecko that drops its tail Her amputated arm shivered in my hand Or did my hand shiver in hers??? Feb. 15. 2023 ~Placed Nineth~ Wave of Fantasy Poetry Contest Sponsor- Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 2/15/2023 11:35:00 AM
Love this, you was running from the land of the dead,,,.you had to come back to take others with you, : ).
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Date: 2/15/2023 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest's well-deserved win, Valsa. Blessings dear friend
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Date: 2/15/2023 6:54:00 AM
BIG congrats, Valsa. I just saw that you have already won. Lovely ride on the wings of fantasy.
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Date: 2/15/2023 5:52:00 AM
Yikes, think we've all done that on the odd occasion Valsa, best of it is I don't have to touch a drop to enjoy the journey into fantasy. Tom
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Date: 2/15/2023 3:26:00 AM
My favourite take on this poetry prompt, although rather chilling!
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Date: 2/15/2023 1:39:00 AM
Loved your poem with its fantasies and voyages. Funny my wife got drunk on a small bottle of cider. She never drank alcohol again.
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Date: 2/15/2023 1:01:00 AM
Wow, that was some overdose !! Please say what it was and I’ll do my best to avoid it. Shivers all round ! Very well expressed.
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Date: 2/15/2023 12:59:00 AM
I asked you to take me away on a wave of of fantasy, and so you did. Thank you for joining my contest and congrats on your win, this was a fantastical journey. I would not have missed it for the world !
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Date: 2/14/2023 10:14:00 PM
Quite an imaginative poem, Valsa:)
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