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On a Rude Night

Nightmares, as though, scorpions, sting. Rough truths, within, like owls, spread wing. What a night! O, what a grim night! Terror, unknown, rules like a king. Sleep lies wounded like a torn kite. Phantoms and vampires show their might. What a pain! O, what a sharp pain! Why have graces gone out-of-sight...? Do sins of day, at night, life-gain? Have some chemicals filled my brain? What a death! O, what deathless death! Why am I, like a culprit slain? Souls lead me to streams of Lethe. Each step, I seem losing my breath. What a woe! O, what a mad woe! Like very drama of Macbeth...! Slowly, yet, morning sun-rays glow. Kissing the blooms the breeze does blow. What an ease! O, what a still ease! Calmness, her charming face, does show. 05 June 2022 Rubaiyat Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Date: 6/14/2022 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Christuraj. I had started writing but couldn't piece all the parts together before the contest ended. I admire your creative skill. Well done.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/20/2022 11:39:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/14/2022 12:55:00 PM
I so love happy endings, glad this one ended with a beautiful breeze, loved your Rubaiyat dear poet, congrats and cheers to you !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/20/2022 11:39:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/14/2022 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your huge win Christuraj! Such emotional devastation, Edgar Allen Poe comes to mind...Anaya
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Date: 6/20/2022 11:39:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/14/2022 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful/Creative" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 6/14/2022 7:41:00 AM
Well done Christuraj--BIG congrats on your win. Glad the night ceded to morning glow.
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Date: 6/14/2022 12:34:00 AM
You've penned a wonderful rubaiyat poem my dear friend, Christaruj. I think this form is difficult just like terzanelle but you did it amazingly dear friend. I enjoyed every line . CONGRATULATIONS on your win! Hugs
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Date: 6/13/2022 10:28:00 PM
After a turbulent night of intense agony, it is so gratifying to see the first gleams of a calm dawn. Beautifully rhyming and intensely emotive. Congratulations on your win, Chris !
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Date: 6/13/2022 10:17:00 PM
I have never tried this form before... A tough form and you have done justice to it... Great imagery throughout...
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Date: 6/13/2022 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Alex, you did a wonderful job in this poem. Best regards
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/13/2022 8:22:00 PM
Thank you very much for the opportunity you have given to me.
Date: 6/8/2022 6:15:00 PM
wow, you did very very well with this form. i love the imagery
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/8/2022 8:10:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/5/2022 9:25:00 AM
Chris, this is a remarkably fine piece of writing. In fact, I only wish I could write a rubaiyat as compelling as this one. Best of luck in Lasaad's contest.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/5/2022 9:15:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/5/2022 7:17:00 AM
A very nice progression through the stanzas - I enjoyed this. Had to look up Lethe, forgotten or did not know, which is sort of funny! Guess I've drunk from that stream...
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/5/2022 9:16:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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