On a Rude Night

Nightmares, as though, scorpions, sting.
Rough truths, within, like owls, spread wing.
What a night! O, what a grim night!
Terror, unknown, rules like a king.

Sleep lies wounded like a torn kite.
Phantoms and vampires show their might.
What a pain! O, what a sharp pain!
Why have graces gone out-of-sight...?

Do sins of day, at night, life-gain?
Have some chemicals filled my brain?
What a death! O, what deathless death!
Why am I, like a culprit slain?

Souls lead me to streams of Lethe.
Each step, I seem losing my breath.
What a woe! O, what a mad woe! 
Like very drama of Macbeth...!

Slowly, yet, morning sun-rays glow.
Kissing the blooms the breeze does blow.
What an ease! O, what a still ease!
Calmness, her charming face, does show.


05 June 2022
Rubaiyat Contest Poetry Contest
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Emate Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 2:34 PM
Congratulations on your win, Christuraj. I had started writing but couldn't piece all the parts together before the contest ended. I admire your creative skill. Well done.
Alex Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 11:39 PM
Thank you very much.
Rose  Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:55 PM
I so love happy endings, glad this one ended with a beautiful breeze, loved your Rubaiyat dear poet, congrats and cheers to you !
Alex Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 11:39 PM
Thank you very much.
Anaya Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations on your huge win Christuraj! Such emotional devastation, Edgar Allen Poe comes to mind...Anaya
Alex Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 11:39 PM
Thank you very much.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful/Creative" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Well done Christuraj--BIG congrats on your win. Glad the night ceded to morning glow.
Gasun Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:34 AM
You've penned a wonderful rubaiyat poem my dear friend, Christaruj. I think this form is difficult just like terzanelle but you did it amazingly dear friend. I enjoyed every line . CONGRATULATIONS on your win! Hugs
George Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 10:28 PM
After a turbulent night of intense agony, it is so gratifying to see the first gleams of a calm dawn. Beautifully rhyming and intensely emotive. Congratulations on your win, Chris !
Kannan Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 10:17 PM
I have never tried this form before... A tough form and you have done justice to it... Great imagery throughout...
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 5:10 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Alex, you did a wonderful job in this poem. Best regards
Alex Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 8:22 PM
Thank you very much for the opportunity you have given to me.
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 6:15 PM
wow, you did very very well with this form. i love the imagery
Alex Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 8:10 PM
Thank you very much.
Hankins Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Chris, this is a remarkably fine piece of writing. In fact, I only wish I could write a rubaiyat as compelling as this one. Best of luck in Lasaad's contest.
Alex Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 9:15 PM
Thank you very much.
Kyser Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 7:17 AM
A very nice progression through the stanzas - I enjoyed this. Had to look up Lethe, forgotten or did not know, which is sort of funny! Guess I've drunk from that stream...
Alex Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 9:16 PM
Thank you very much.
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