On a Mat a Pier

deride derision  divide division devise a vision
play with words like rythym  tick something squared
is power of two and cubed's the power of three 
not four that's more
are inconsistent seas unfound or foundered 
I think there four iambic meters cause caucasion
indecision in a celtic melded welded mind I find
a loss of words incomprehensic in reprehensic
pensitivity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Mason Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Very clever writing here, Donald. Will have to study more about this form ...
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January 12, 2010 at 4:59 AM
Congrats Donald on your burlesque being featured. Vince
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January 11, 2010 at 1:44 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Donald >> James
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January 11, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Well my friend, it has been some time. Did you ever publish your book? I hope so....as I have told you often...you are a terrrific writer. I would be first in line. Your old bud, Lainie
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January 11, 2010 at 4:44 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Donald. Love, Carol
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January 10, 2010 at 3:59 PM
Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty
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January 10, 2010 at 1:31 PM
Interesting use of math concepts for a creative view. I like the alliteration in the opening line. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Karen
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January 10, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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