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on a frozen twig the little bird dreams of spring oh! to see the spring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/31/2023 1:03:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts of the birds... <3
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/31/2023 5:43:00 PM
thanks, sweet Paige. Have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 12/31/2023 6:05:00 AM
As always, your haiku contains exquisite imagery. Nature is truly inspiring; despite its diminutive stature, it manages a great deal more than humans.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/31/2023 5:44:00 PM
I always look forward to your comments, Sotto. Yours always lift me up. I loved your words--despite its diminutive stature, it (the bird) manages a great deal more than humans. You gave me some wisdom, and I am grateful...your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 12/31/2023 5:50:00 AM
As always lovely imagery in your haiku.. Nature is a true inspiration for you..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/31/2023 5:44:00 PM
thanks, Silent One....gotta love nature, right? :-)
Date: 12/30/2023 10:08:00 PM
It never ceases to amaze me how they survive in such harsh conditions. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/31/2023 5:45:00 PM
I know...they are amazing creatures. thanks for sharing, Sara
Date: 12/30/2023 9:54:00 PM
delicate little creatures - they bring light on the darkest of days - the best to you
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/31/2023 5:45:00 PM
well said and beautiful words, Matt. Thank you. Happy New Year, Sara
Date: 12/30/2023 9:31:00 PM
And to think: The bird is not even wearing his galoshes, gloves, or cap. Pretty hearty species!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/31/2023 5:46:00 PM
I know...they're amazing! I appreciate your cleverness! Have a blessed new year, Sara
Date: 12/30/2023 6:03:00 PM
This is a pleasant haiku. Birds seem to stay warm with their feather coats.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/30/2023 7:06:00 PM
thanks for the visit...and I assume birds are naturally warm with their feather coats. I just find them adorable. hugs, Sara

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