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On a Dull Weather

Why is the weather so moody today? Whose dirge do the sun and moon, and earth play? Why the flowers and plants in sadness sway, Why is the weather so moody today? Why do winds dire secret silence display? Why do clouds their hidden sorrows betray? Why is the weather so moody today? Whose dirge do the sun and moon, and earth play? 17 June 2021

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Date: 6/22/2021 6:10:00 PM
Back to say congrats for your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/7/2021 11:19:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/21/2021 9:45:00 PM
Visiting again to see that it is a winner as well, congrats
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 5:48:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/21/2021 10:12:00 AM
I too often relate to nature as a sentient being/force! Congrats--most interesting!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 5:48:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/19/2021 4:31:00 AM
Deep questions that keep us guessing, Christuraj:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/19/2021 10:09:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/18/2021 11:00:00 AM
Lovely rhythm to this finely crafted poem. Well done!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/18/2021 7:24:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/18/2021 9:00:00 AM
I like the way you did this one with personifiication. Nicely done in triolet form
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/18/2021 7:23:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/18/2021 6:07:00 AM
A novel approach, and the same rhyme throughout creates a fine impact.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/18/2021 7:18:00 AM
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Date: 6/17/2021 8:34:00 AM
A creative way of writing a triolet with questions! I like it! Nicely done, Christuraj! Blessings, Kim M
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/18/2021 7:17:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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