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On a Dazzling White Horse

Our exquisite Queen of passion
Rides on a dazzling white horse
Within her hand she wields a pen
Describing adventures of course

She takes us to many places
So our own psyches we can explore
To the thoughts of former lovers
Or through imaginary doors

Within her realm she is fearless
A true warrior of the mind
Some say the passion whisperer
She can give color to the blind

The fountain of her thoughts endless
With her we travel back in time
To former days of gallantry  
As we engage in every line

Mesmerized by her artistry
As we follow her where she goes
Eileen's sexy has no limits
Ooh la la licious as it flows

Dedicated to Eileen, our queen of passion.

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/18/2015 9:57:00 AM

I don't feel much like a Queen right now with all that's going on, but this poem....no one can take that away from me. Thank you, Richard. I'm getting all choked up. Thank you for your friendship. It gives me hope for better things to come....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/18/2015 10:09:00 AM

Much more than a bit, Richard. Never underestimate your place in my life...Thank you for your much treasured friendship.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/18/2015 10:05:00 AM

Better things are indeed coming. I'm glad I can provide a bit of hope.

Constance La France

Date: 4/17/2015 4:25:00 PM

Richard, this is a beautiful dedication to your poet friend, very nice, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Patience

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2015 5:21:00 PM

My pleasure Constance, I appreciate your visit as well .

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/13/2015 8:45:00 PM

She does dazzle with anything in the romance field.. Great write my friend.. A superb tribute.. A7..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2015 5:21:00 PM

Thanks Robert.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2015 11:56:00 PM

women are such lovely creatures lol, enjoyed your write -p.d.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/13/2015 8:03:00 AM

Indeed they are Linda.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/12/2015 12:27:00 PM

i must agree about eileen's sense of passion.. grreat read, rick!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/13/2015 8:07:00 AM

Thanks Nette, hugs back to you.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/12/2015 12:16:00 PM

A lovely tribute to a great person and poet Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/13/2015 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Tim.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/12/2015 2:12:00 AM

I love our sweet Eileen..Ow yes fervescent are her words and blissful her dreams,Oh yes of passion She is queen.An amazing tribute to one of the most beautiful souls in the world

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2015 7:42:00 AM

I totally agree with your assessment, she is a talented and special person. We are fortunate to have her here.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/11/2015 4:53:00 PM

You know what, Richard? You have such a following...Don't get discouraged if this doesn't get many comments from your regulars. It's just me....Thanks anyway, though. Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2015 5:06:00 PM

I meant....it's because it's ABOUT me. Never mind....Just don't feel bad. It's not the beautiy of the poem...but the content. It will always be cherished by me. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2015 5:03:00 PM

It usually takes a few days for people to get around to me, there are lots of people to visit. Sometimes I feel bad because I neglect some of my friends here.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 4/11/2015 12:31:00 PM

Beautiful poem in its own but what a wonderful tribute to Eileen.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2015 1:07:00 PM

Thanks Brenda, she is deserving of our appreciation.

Len Gasun

Date: 4/11/2015 10:49:00 AM

This is a very lovely poem and dedication to one of our great and lovely poet friends here my dear friend, Richard. I enjoyed so much the read tonight. Thanks a lot for sharing! More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2015 1:08:00 PM

Hugs to you as well.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/11/2015 9:55:00 AM

Richard! I'm so so honored by your write. :) I'm just so happy!!!! Thanks ever so much. You have brought me immense joy! :) It is a title I treasure. You first gave it to me....and it remains with me. HUGSSSSSS Sorry I didn't see this earlier. It's been a busy day.....church, then had family over for lunch...then a nap....and now...I wake up to this beauty. What a way to wake up! :) Thanks. You know how I treasure words...It's Oooh la la licious to me!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2015 1:07:00 PM

My pleasure Eileen, you add just the right amount of spice to the soup. I'm pleased you enjoyed my tribute to you and your talented writing. ;0)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/11/2015 9:58:00 AM

OH!!!! Just read it the again...the second time round is even sweeter....I delved in every line....slowly! :) Lovely

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/11/2015 9:27:00 AM

Great eloquent piece on Eileen,Richard. She is indeed the Queen of Passion. This is a well thought-out tribute, worthy of a good friendship such as yours. She would love this! All the best! Kim :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2015 9:42:00 AM

Thanks Kim.