On a Bender

On a Bender. 

New Orleans, dawn, woke up on the floor of a hotel room, 
don’t know why I didn’t sleep in the bed. A shower, vapid 
water ran slowly down my body like worms they crawled 
around and refused to leave. In a bar where men sat in 
silence watching TV with sound turned off. A double whisky 
and the worms disappeared. Thought I can’t sit here and 
drink like an alcoholic, I had a bag of bacon flavoured crisps, 
and to show I was a man of taste I asked for Dutch beer. 
Time runs fast, when you are drunk, suddenly eight too late 
for the plane home that left at nine o’clock. One more beer 
and I will be ok. Got another plane, without my luggage, as 
I could not remember the hotel where I had slept on the floor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Collins Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Jan - love the Dutch beer and man of taste line. kathy amazing how easily luggage gets lost.
Hansen Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 4:56 PM
just another beer and I will alright... dear it never worked
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September 15, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Jan, a touch night.. enjoyed the poem... Linda
Hansen Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 4:57 PM
thank you Poet Destroyer
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