Patricia Sawyer Poet Pantoum

Omega

In a place of standing stones
a mighty beast awakens
Ivory ribcage aglow
fire raging in his belly
a mighty beast awakens
scaled wings flutter
fire rages in his belly
he is Omega the last of his kind
scaled wings flutter
Ivory ribcage aglow
He is omega the last of his kind
In a place of standing stones.

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Debbie Guzzi January 7, 2010 at 6:35 AM OHhhh, I want to know what happened to the Alpha! Light & Love

Audrey Haick January 5, 2010 at 4:24 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup, Patricia! Awesome! Peace, Audrey

James Fraser January 5, 2010 at 9:06 AM Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James

January 4, 2010 at 12:13 PM Thought provoking! Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown January 4, 2010 at 3:26 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Patricia. May you have may more. Love, Carol

September 29, 2009 at 12:45 PM Good use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown September 24, 2009 at 2:59 PM Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals patricia. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire September 24, 2009 at 1:33 PM Hi Patricia, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn

Keith Bickerstaffe December 11, 2008 at 6:46 PM Neat title! Cool repetitions in accordance with the form. Super imagery and language. Well done Patricia! Best wishes, Keith