Oliver Thinks

"Why," thought the cat,
"can I see through the glass,
but when I try to go through it,
it won't let me pass?"

"There are bugs out there,"
the cat thought to himself,
"yet to them, I'm as dull as
a book on a shelf!"

The cat shook his head,
"This is really too much!
There's two squirrels in the yard
and a bird in the brush."

"How much fun it would be,"
with a mew he announced,
"to hunt and to stalk and then
gracefully pounce."

"Why, I'd shake them until
their necks were broke!
Maybe then," mused the cat,
"I'd be more than a joke."

"They'd be amazed by my prowess,"
he thought with a sigh,
"I'd torture them slowly and
they'd wonder why,"

"they never realized that
I was a threat,
while completely ignoring me
like I was their pet."

"I'd show them," he growled
as he laid on the sill,
"with them in my tummy,
I'd savor the kill."

"They'd show some respect,"
he thought with a yawn,
"I'd shown them who's king
of this yard and this lawn."

Head full of adventure,
he fell fast asleep,
safe in his house,
with plenty to eat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 7/21/2010 2:06:00 PM
Danielle, Congratulations on your win with this delightful entry. I am a cat lover and I could so identify the cat in your poem with our cat. The birds tease him and drive him crazy in his window bed. I loved this!
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:36:00 PM
awwww I great verse to have illustrated for a Children's book! Congrad's on your fine win! Light & Love
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations Danielle on your well deserved win in Amy Green's contest "Choose One, Have Fun". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2010 3:36:00 PM
Congrats Daniell on your winning poem in Amy's contest with this marvelous creation.. enjoy your wonderful win in the spotlight at the winners circle.. with luv..
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Date: 7/16/2010 2:51:00 PM
This is fantastic. I was reading it, predicting the ending, and loving it the whole time. Thanks for sharing, and congratulations on your win. This one deserved it. :) -G
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