Oldtown

Tall and narrow,
the houses stand,
wall against wall,
hunched together
on the edge of the 
cobbled street,
as if armed against
the unknown.
Tiny balconies
Where laundry 
Used hang on railings 
To dry, now bursting
With potted plants 
Walls bright yellows, 
greens and blues, 
stucco and stone
mortared together
hundreds of years ago
by stout men in
leather aprons
with the rudest of
implements,
they lean inward 
over the street, 
which once ran with mud,
the contents of
slop jars, and wash water.
Now teeming with tourists
who hobble on the cobbles,
peering into first floors,
converted into tiny shops
crammed with hats
and shirts and sandals,
soaps and wine and bracelets,
postcards and paintings,
candy and local delicasies.
Oldtown suddenly finds itself
squarely in the middle 
off the twenty-first century.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Peck Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Your poem is so colorful, I felt I was walking down that street. Sad, in a way. I love old buildings and wish they could always shelter families, but time marches on :)
Peckham Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Thank you again, Ann. Many of the "oldtowns" in the older cities have become tourist attractions, no longer occupied by the owners. In Europe and other places, the shops have taken over the downstairs, but the owners actually still live in the upper floors.
Hankins Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Rich images and dramatic flow make this a fine, fine poem, Barbara. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Peckham Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 11:13 AM
I'm glad it resonated with you. T hanks you for the read and the nice comment.
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