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Oldman

once there was an old man on a lane he always had many cats then he took a train and went down another lane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/12/2016 9:20:00 PM
:) AWESOME POEM
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Date: 6/17/2012 10:48:00 PM
hey man or girl your just like me read my poems and post on them.
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Date: 6/6/2012 5:27:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Date: 6/5/2012 6:58:00 PM
very nice quatrain ..
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Date: 6/5/2012 12:01:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets Lalala. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 12:51:00 PM
sweet and funny,thank you,Ivy
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