Oldman

once there was an old man on a lane he always had many cats then he took a train and went down another lane

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/13/2024 7:00:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2016 9:20:00 PM

:) AWESOME POEM

Matt Poopenheimer

Date: 6/17/2012 10:48:00 PM

hey man or girl your just like me read my poems and post on them.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/6/2012 5:27:00 AM

This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

Joseph May

Date: 6/5/2012 6:58:00 PM

very nice quatrain ..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/5/2012 12:01:00 PM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets Lalala. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Ivy Vresk

Date: 6/4/2012 12:51:00 PM

sweet and funny,thank you,Ivy