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Old Time Neighborhood

OLD TIME NEIGHBORHOOD (1934) Reborn a wrinkled old child Inhaling the smell of budget Walking those cracked skated-on sidewalks Old trees with grainy knothole eyes standing arm-wrapping round thick so strong Noisy kids uncaring – knee-patched barefoot Noisy kids carried on a listened-for breeze A scrawny let-out-of-doors cat darts dares to cross the one-way street Lower middle class? Yes But respectfully litter-clean! No liquor bottles in the gutter - no wretched used dried-putrid condoms A Victrola whales from an apartment house window “I’m confessin’” (that I love you) And a drunk stumbles home at 8:00 in the morning Houses with large long porches meant to be sat upon at sundown on hot days And Oh, yes! There are tears “Road of life” She identifies

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Date: 4/14/2011 11:28:00 AM
yes i remember those beautiful days of old, this was a most beautiful and tender poem. thank you for your comment on Fort Sumter.
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Date: 4/14/2011 9:05:00 AM
I was born in the city where the "Old Time Neighborhood" atmosphere you describe so well here existed. People were poor, but kept their homes and streets clean. We spend many hours watching sundown from the porch. Love the way you describe the baby as "Inhaling the smell of the budget." People have more wealth and "things" now, but seem to appreciate them less. Awesome poem, Daver! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:31:00 AM
Sounds like a very special time in time Dave.. very interesting details of this era and your words bring it to life allowing us to enjoy the moment with u .. impressive write my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:04:00 AM
Very descriptive work..I am not familiar with city life so I don't know if this is the way it is in that kind of neighborhood..Can only know from what I see on tv, movie, and news reports..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Sara
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