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Old Shattered Pieces

Old chair shattered pieces trash now
I'm envious of my love's new chair
For he softly lays his sleepy brow
Upon that brown leather without a care

I'm envious of my love's new chair
For he snuggles down close sleeps
Upon that brown leather without a care
Rests, dreams, and quietly talks peeps

For he snuggles down close sleeps
In this big man new leather recliner
Rest, dreams, and quietly talks peeps
This big man who rest then is kinder

In this big man new leather recliner
He caresses the leather gently
This big man who rest then is kinder
While he rest I watch him intently

He caresses the leather gently
For he softly lays his sleepy brow
While he rest I watch him intently
Old chair shattered pieces trash now

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Michelle Pryor Date: 9/2/2010 1:22:00 PM i love this.....im know u r glad its jus a chair..jus kiding..Good one..God bless Login to Reply

Jayne Eggins Date: 8/29/2010 3:41:00 AM Wonderful Pantoum Sara ... I have a chair like that, its falling to bits but i wont throw it out lol its still got so living to do yet love Jayne Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/12/2010 7:52:00 PM Glad this one won. I remember it, so nice and cozy! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/9/2010 8:44:00 AM Congratulations Sara on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Pantoum Me". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/8/2010 6:14:00 PM Congrats for the second place in my contest, Sara Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 8/8/2010 1:32:00 PM Congratulations on your big no. 2. I'm finding you in the winner circle very often. Lovely poem. I have my man's big blue leather chair and I sit in my smaller version and still see him sitting there. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 8/8/2010 7:43:00 AM congrats on your well deserved win!! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/8/2010 7:21:00 AM Congrats Sara on your winning poem in the Pantoum Me contest with this wonderful piece so very touching.. enjoy another big win my friend this happy Sunday..with luv.. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/4/2010 7:25:00 AM a man and his recliner lol,, awesome write,, enjoyed..P.D. Login to Reply

Earle Brown Date: 8/2/2010 6:21:00 PM Sounds comfortable. best wishes in the contest. Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 8/2/2010 2:50:00 PM lol.aw, why don't you just take over your love's chair.haha(: nice one. ~Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/1/2010 6:45:00 PM Men sure get attached to those old recliners!! This was a fun pantoum to read, SAra, good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 8/1/2010 6:28:00 PM funny--so you want you a new chair?? Login to Reply

Kris Walters Date: 8/1/2010 6:18:00 PM Well woven and humorous! Fun to read. Kris Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/1/2010 5:53:00 PM Thanks, Sara for supporting my contest Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 8/1/2010 5:27:00 PM Nice write... thank you for your support through tis sad time. Michael Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 8/1/2010 5:23:00 PM I have a recliner but it is getting a bit worn down. I like what you did with the pantoum form. It is a Malaysian form originally I believe. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 8/1/2010 2:33:00 PM Cool Pantoum Sara. Good luck in Dr Ram's Contest. Thanks for your comment. But Sara, without first a change of enought of the American's people's hearts, no, an election will not change a world ran by carnal minds of greed. I am praying for a miracle. Smile. Agape, Moses Login to Reply