Sara Kendrick Poet Pantoum

Old Shattered Pieces

Old chair shattered pieces trash now
I'm envious of my love's new chair
For he softly lays his sleepy brow
Upon that brown leather without a care

I'm envious of my love's new chair
For he snuggles down close sleeps
Upon that brown leather without a care
Rests, dreams, and quietly talks peeps

For he snuggles down close sleeps
In this big man new leather recliner
Rest, dreams, and quietly talks peeps
This big man who rest then is kinder

In this big man new leather recliner
He caresses the leather gently
This big man who rest then is kinder
While he rest I watch him intently

He caresses the leather gently
For he softly lays his sleepy brow
While he rest I watch him intently
Old chair shattered pieces trash now

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Michelle Pryor September 2, 2010 at 1:22 PM i love this.....im know u r glad its jus a chair..jus kiding..Good one..God bless

Jayne Eggins August 29, 2010 at 3:41 AM Wonderful Pantoum Sara ... I have a chair like that, its falling to bits but i wont throw it out lol its still got so living to do yet love Jayne

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2010 at 7:52 PM Glad this one won. I remember it, so nice and cozy! Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown August 9, 2010 at 8:44 AM Congratulations Sara on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Pantoum Me". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta August 8, 2010 at 6:14 PM Congrats for the second place in my contest, Sara

Joyce Johnson August 8, 2010 at 1:32 PM Congratulations on your big no. 2. I'm finding you in the winner circle very often. Lovely poem. I have my man's big blue leather chair and I sit in my smaller version and still see him sitting there. Love, Joyce

Doris Culverhouse August 8, 2010 at 7:43 AM congrats on your well deserved win!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 8, 2010 at 7:21 AM Congrats Sara on your winning poem in the Pantoum Me contest with this wonderful piece so very touching.. enjoy another big win my friend this happy Sunday..with luv..

Poet Destroyer A August 4, 2010 at 7:25 AM a man and his recliner lol,, awesome write,, enjoyed..P.D.

Earle Brown August 2, 2010 at 6:21 PM Sounds comfortable. best wishes in the contest.

Lynette Chachere August 2, 2010 at 2:50 PM lol.aw, why don't you just take over your love's chair.haha(: nice one. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich August 1, 2010 at 6:45 PM Men sure get attached to those old recliners!! This was a fun pantoum to read, SAra, good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse August 1, 2010 at 6:28 PM funny--so you want you a new chair??

Kris Walters August 1, 2010 at 6:18 PM Well woven and humorous! Fun to read. Kris

Dr.Ram Mehta August 1, 2010 at 5:53 PM Thanks, Sara for supporting my contest

Michael J. Falotico August 1, 2010 at 5:27 PM Nice write... thank you for your support through tis sad time. Michael

Matthew Anish August 1, 2010 at 5:23 PM I have a recliner but it is getting a bit worn down. I like what you did with the pantoum form. It is a Malaysian form originally I believe. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

John Freeman August 1, 2010 at 2:33 PM Cool Pantoum Sara. Good luck in Dr Ram's Contest. Thanks for your comment. But Sara, without first a change of enought of the American's people's hearts, no, an election will not change a world ran by carnal minds of greed. I am praying for a miracle. Smile. Agape, Moses