Old Nonsense - Jack Ellison

(Reply to Jack Ellison’s “A Secret Formula”
with my apologies)

Jack ruminates, one day past
no i shall not say his prime
an old duffer - no, a daffy duck
with a bit of luck in his bill
be careful passing about your specimen
oh c’mon soup, his mind
he’s no average joe, no joe
at all, but a happy chap
Jack thinks himself playing craps
everyone leans in to hear the secret
but his formula is sealed
in the recesses of a junket
his trunk open, hanging out
for all to see
delighting you and me
still, dear poet, fasten your overcoat
and Happy Birthday, dear!

9/23/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ellison Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 10:18 AM
You are one joyous sweetie to know Miss Kim! Sure happy I "stumbled" on you!!! Are you okay? LOL Love you Miss Kim! XOX
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Thank you so much! Glad you read this one! I had fun with it! I am doing good after my bout with covid. Back to life! Love you too, Jack xx
Baker Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 4:56 PM
Quite the poet, and very entertaining writer. Thanks for the poem for his birthday, Kim. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Thank you, Bill!
Tor Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Ha ha Jack will love reading this birthday surprise from you Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, Mike!
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Hello Kim, I always look forward to Jack's poetry. I always get a chuckle. Hugs Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 11:15 AM
Hello Kim, yes he does light up the day. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 1:15 PM
He lights up the day! :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Haha we all look forward to his daily antics lol. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 1:15 PM
Yes, we do! He is a sweetheart!
Kyser Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Nice birthday card To read in the yard On a birthday junket; Glad you thunk it!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 7:40 AM
LOL! Thanks for the laugh, Jeff!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 5:14 AM
Lively and fun poem with an invitation to wish Jack a Happy Birthday. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 6:50 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs, Victor!
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