Old Nonsense - Jack Ellison

(Reply to Jack Ellison’s “A Secret Formula”
with my apologies)

Jack ruminates, one day past
no i shall not say his prime
an old duffer - no, a daffy duck
with a bit of luck in his bill
be careful passing about your specimen
oh c’mon soup, his mind
he’s no average joe, no joe
at all, but a happy chap
Jack thinks himself playing craps
everyone leans in to hear the secret
but his formula is sealed
in the recesses of a junket
his trunk open, hanging out
for all to see
delighting you and me
still, dear poet, fasten your overcoat
and Happy Birthday, dear!

9/23/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/28/2022 10:18:00 AM
You are one joyous sweetie to know Miss Kim! Sure happy I "stumbled" on you!!! Are you okay? LOL Love you Miss Kim! XOX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2022 11:04:00 AM
Thank you so much! Glad you read this one! I had fun with it! I am doing good after my bout with covid. Back to life! Love you too, Jack xx
Date: 9/26/2022 4:56:00 PM
Quite the poet, and very entertaining writer. Thanks for the poem for his birthday, Kim. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2022 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 9/23/2022 12:03:00 PM
Ha ha Jack will love reading this birthday surprise from you Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2022 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 9/23/2022 10:41:00 AM
Hello Kim, I always look forward to Jack's poetry. I always get a chuckle. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/24/2022 11:15:00 AM
Hello Kim, yes he does light up the day. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2022 1:15:00 PM
He lights up the day! :)
Date: 9/23/2022 10:18:00 AM
Haha we all look forward to his daily antics lol. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2022 1:15:00 PM
Yes, we do! He is a sweetheart!
Date: 9/23/2022 7:22:00 AM
Nice birthday card To read in the yard On a birthday junket; Glad you thunk it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2022 7:40:00 AM
LOL! Thanks for the laugh, Jeff!
Date: 9/23/2022 5:14:00 AM
Lively and fun poem with an invitation to wish Jack a Happy Birthday. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2022 6:50:00 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs, Victor!
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