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Old Mountain

Cold is the snow, under my feet Blades are the wind, at my skin Cane is the object, guiding me through Beauty is the hope, I will see Rocks I grab, along my way Fear is evident, in unending fall Strength fills old bones, to push on Ice blisters convert, my face to stone A slip, I have no breath The voice, has pulled me to My cane bent, I make a step Glory, is the situation One final leap, amazed Every mountain ever made, shines Light combines with air, old eyes reflect Stars shine, no restraint exists This is the peak, beauty Every color unknown, hangs in a misty cradle My blued sight illuminates, I feel not but warmth I grip the ice, and look on at god forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/14/2010 12:10:00 PM
Justin, super poem and beautifully written. Most deserved of it's win in Carol's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:52:00 PM
Congratulations Justin on your poem's success in the competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:54:00 PM
Congrats Justin on your HM in the Perfect World contest with this magnificent write and a special honor for u to so enjoy.. with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations Justin on placing in my "In My Perfect World Contest" July 13, 2010. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2010 8:04:00 PM
I liked climbing this mountain with you, Justin. It's good to see you posting again! We've missed you. If you have a chance, you might want to check out a poem I wrote with a similar theme: "The Mountain I Believed to Be Id." Thank you for sharing your journey with us! Love, Carolyn
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