Old Mountain

Cold is the snow, under my feet
Blades are the wind, at my skin
Cane is the object, guiding me through
Beauty is the hope, I will see

Rocks I grab, along my way
Fear is evident, in unending fall
Strength fills old bones, to push on
Ice blisters convert, my face to stone

A slip, I have no breath
The voice, has pulled me to
My cane bent, I make a step
Glory, is the situation

One final leap, amazed
Every mountain ever made, shines
Light combines with air, old eyes reflect
Stars shine, no restraint exists

This is the peak, beauty
Every color unknown, hangs in a misty cradle
My blued sight illuminates, I feel not but warmth
I grip the ice, and look on at god forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/14/2010 12:10:00 PM
Justin, super poem and beautifully written. Most deserved of it's win in Carol's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:52:00 PM
Congratulations Justin on your poem's success in the competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:54:00 PM
Congrats Justin on your HM in the Perfect World contest with this magnificent write and a special honor for u to so enjoy.. with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations Justin on placing in my "In My Perfect World Contest" July 13, 2010. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2010 8:04:00 PM
I liked climbing this mountain with you, Justin. It's good to see you posting again! We've missed you. If you have a chance, you might want to check out a poem I wrote with a similar theme: "The Mountain I Believed to Be Id." Thank you for sharing your journey with us! Love, Carolyn
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