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Old Mirror and Her Lil Girl

She is silent & she plays Mostly she has books before her face She rarely come to me & ran away as fast as she could I know her since her childhood She is my Lil girl & I'm an old mirror of her room One day she came to me Having beautiful smile & gleaming eyes Singing romantic songs & flying As if she isn't watching mirror Like she is playing lead role in her favorite fairy tale I felt her crazy & myself amazed 'cause I realized My Lil girl who is actually shy Fall in love with a guy One day she came to me With wetty eyes, throat filled Uninterested in everything Ist time focusing her face & thinking As if she isn't watching a mirror Like she is a cop beating herself, arresting someoneelse I felt sad & she was depressed Then I realized My Lil girl, so lovely Failed & Fooled in love, badly One day she came to me Pushed her eyebrows up Brought leader's smile on her face One hand up & delicately waved As if she isn't watching a mirror Like she is addressing the whole world through me I felt proud, she looks great & finally I realized My Lil girl unknowingly Just growing up slowly... &...slowly

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/7/2021 9:30:00 AM

Excellent title, the personification is magnificently done. It's a pleasure to find this beautiful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Sakshi ~

Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/14/2021 9:50:00 PM

Thank you! Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me!! Really!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/30/2020 3:44:00 PM

Well written Sakshi, congrats on your win. Tom

Sakshi Singh
Date: 1/30/2020 8:06:00 PM

Wow..thank you so much for this awesome news.. This made my morning beautiful :)

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 1/29/2020 2:17:00 PM

Sakshi Singh - you, beautiful, intelligent, soulful young woman, are full of ancient wisdom. You write from the soul, maybe an 'old soul' ...beautiful story here. You are a very gifted soul...write from the higher self always. You are a gifted and talented "WRITER". Thank you for sharing. I have added this to my favourites. Leanne. x

Sakshi Singh
Date: 1/29/2020 2:40:00 PM

Thank you so much Leanne. Your comments are like rain in bare lands Bcz I was actually losing hope that I can write better.I don't know how to express in words the so much happiness I got after reading ur words.But next morning lst thing I m going to do is read ur comments loudly to my whole family :)

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/29/2020 2:27:00 PM

You should be proud of yourself Sakshi, very much so. Your writing is very very good. Believe it. In your mirror your mother. She will be very proud of you. Beautiful write. This poem of yours, full of wisdom, should be awarded POTD.

Sakshi Singh
Date: 1/29/2020 2:24:00 PM

Thank you Thank you sooooo much for these lovely compliments :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/18/2019 10:50:00 AM

This is so good. I don’t know how old you are but you have a way of combining wisdom and innocence in equal measure. Thanks for your visit this morning. Do drop by again at your leisure. ;0)

Sakshi Singh
Date: 9/18/2019 10:56:00 AM

I'm 18...thank you so much for such a lovely appreciation... :)....:)

Silent One

Date: 7/14/2019 4:53:00 AM

A brilliant and well versed poem, such a talented young poet you are...

Sakshi Singh
Date: 7/14/2019 6:46:00 PM

OMG! Thank you so much!