Old Man's Hands

They were once fine, 
long-fingered and aristocratic:
photographed resting lightly 
on a model's shoulder 
as she wore a mink 
while clutching a Gucci.

In childhood they played 
like all kids' hands play:
clutching, grabbing, throwing, 
waving to unseen allies 
while fighting to a gory death 
hordes of relentless foes.

In manhood they sought 
to caress a woman's flesh 
rather than play throw and catch...
they explored the wondrous nooks 
and crannies with hunger and hesitancy, 
always joyfully losing themselves 
in her eternal unknowingness.

They were mighty then, 
the hands of a young god, 
giving pleasure in equal measure 
to its taking...
but now their skin lies cracked and 
shrieking of seven decades--
the fingers are bending like old trees 
succumbing finally to the brutal wind, 
with knobs sprouting from joints 
and a low pain taking up a permanent 
and most uninvited residence....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Drowley Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 12:11 PM
'L.J., Congratulations, you have well captured the hands of time that some day fit us all. David'
Carber Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 12:31 PM
Thank you David, much appreciated!
Radice Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 11:07 AM
A great, poignant write LJ.
Carber Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 12:31 PM
Thanks Gary!
La France Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 6:38 PM
LJ, excellent, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance
Carber Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 11:02 AM
Thank you,Constance
Kauffman Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 11:18 AM
So melancholy, LJ - a poem of memory and grieving. Your imagery really carries your poem from beginning to end. Congratulations on your first place win my friend.
Carber Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 11:03 AM
Thanks Sam--creating the poem is a [minor] consolation for getting old!
Roper Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 8:43 PM
Well written verse, but sad,age does win at the end. L.J., I just turned 68 :) so it hit home . Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`*
Carber Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 1:41 PM
Thank you Eve--it might cheer you up a bit to read a book a friend gave me: THE GIFT OF YEARS by Joan Chittister. It's a collection of 3 doz. short essays running the gamut from regret to freedom to ageism to spirituality, etc. all beautifully written!
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