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Old Man's Dream

Cat on a post: long bamboo, short bamboo. Old man's dream of a garden

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/7/2017 11:37:00 AM
Oh, how I love this haiku! The imagery in your few words is stunning. Well done :) And welcome to The Soup!
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Date: 2/7/2017 8:44:00 AM
Delightful!! I love the image this presents for me. I'm also motivated to try a one line Haiku. I also spent an interesting hour on line looking up "long bamboo, short bamboo"--fascinating what you find. Thanks for the poem.
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