Old Lovers

Wrinkly and skinny like the turtle’s necks,
got on each other in a blissful daze

like lizards, the old paramours have sex:
the man, a former fire fighter, lays

flat on his stomach, his sweetheart, an ex-
astronomer, - on him. He whispers: “Grace,

I still love you”. Grace loves him too. Alas,
she sleeps. Grace always was a sleepy lass.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Messina Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Great poem Kurt, however you were supposed to rhyme the first words as well. Sorry about the HM...All the best, Charlie
Ravidas Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 10:34 AM
Thanks, Charles. Best wishes to you and your contestants)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 7:33 AM
A wonderful 'Room With A View' Kurt, Best Wishes Indeed, Aloha William
Ravidas Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Thank you, William)
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 7:24 PM
so funny the ending there!! Hmm, a new contest?
Ravidas Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Hoping, you'll take part too)
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