Old Doors

old doors time has greyed wind softened as seasons passed youth fled, beauty lasts

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Harry Horsman

Date: 4/6/2021 11:33:00 PM

Great skill to bring out, these wonderful Haiku, way under the maximum syllable count. Yes i too love old doors.

Ann Peck
Date: 4/28/2021 8:30:00 AM

I love Haiku. It says so much with so little. I also love Chinese proverbs for the same reason. Thanks for your comments

Suzanne Clear

Date: 4/6/2021 1:53:00 PM

Dear Anne, Have always loved old doors. You explained why. Thank you for opening some doors in my heart today, suzanne

Ann Peck
Date: 7/1/2021 12:38:00 PM

Thank you, Suzanne, for your lovely comments.

John Gondolf

Date: 3/28/2021 5:56:00 AM

Wonderful words to ponder, Ann. If we age gracefully, the beauty last forever. Hugs, John

Ann Peck
Date: 3/28/2021 8:03:00 AM

Thanks, John. I love old doors, wrinkled and warped. Neruda wrote a nice poem about them. I can't remember the poem but it had "the soul emerges" that I thought was beautiful. Good to hear from you! Hugs.