Old Covered Bridges

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Ah, the rustic charm of our old uncovered bridges
built in a century not quite on the verge of major industrialization -
back in a time when connections were vital
for fledgling communities just starting to survive and later, to thrive.
They spanned an entire era with a semblance
of simplicity and romance, providing shelter
in a world still moving slowly yet steadily toward progress.
It was not long before they’d be left behind.

Today we travel across vast expanses of bridges – uncovered ones
from which the world we view flies past us
through the windows of speeding automobiles 
and virtually from screens of phones and computers.
No longer are we isolated from the world.
Today’s bridges span global communities
in a society where everyone on the planet is privy 
to almost everything happening everywhere!
Today’s bridges, forged of steel, are longer and stronger.
We take them for granted, feeling secure in our convenient technologies
as we communicate and travel at faster rates
than ever dreamed possible two centuries ago.

Alas, once the last remnants of such things as
old-fashioned covered wooden bridges are obliterated,
they will be as ancient Egyptian artifacts viewed on Google
with less and less interest shown by each new generation, and
the yet unborn poets of tomorrow will one day write with nostalgia
of today’s uncovered bridges of steel.

Aug. 27, 2017 for the "Covered Bridges" Contest of Craig Cornish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/28/2017 4:45:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea, Oregon they still have those beautiful bridges and some still in use the last time I was there. Luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/27/2017 8:42:00 PM
Wonderful write, Andrea, and I agree - I love the architecture of new bridges as much as I love the charm of the old ones ... lovely take on this subject! Best of luck in the contest! :-)
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Date: 8/27/2017 8:30:00 PM
I liked the contrast, you have shown that new is not always bad, even I long for the days of old covered bridges!!! hugs!
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Date: 8/27/2017 8:21:00 PM
Oh, well done Andrea. What a great take on this theme. GL, I think this will do well!
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Date: 8/27/2017 7:42:00 PM
Love the history and comparisons! GL on contest!
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:11:00 PM
A beautiful poetic history of the covered bridge. At the end something exciting awaited. This is a winner! My Compliments, Andrea!
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Date: 8/27/2017 4:37:00 PM
I'm sure you saw some amazing bridges in Iowa... lovely Andrea
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Date: 8/27/2017 1:55:00 PM
Hi Andrea, another excellent poem fron your pen. Good luck in the contest. What a difference between the bridges of today and the bridges of yesterday. The only time i have seen old covered bridges is in movies. They do have such old world charm. I liked the contrast between both as i followed your words. Some beautiful images painted onto my canvas. Hoping this does well. Hugs....Mike. XX. Goes into my faves.
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Date: 8/27/2017 9:23:00 AM
Great contrast brought out, Andrea:)
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Date: 8/27/2017 5:57:00 AM
Beautiful images of contrast between old and new--well done Andrea! Good luck for the contest!
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Date: 8/27/2017 5:54:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/27/2017 5:36:00 AM
A great write Andrea! As a rigger, I've only worked on two bridges in my life, and they are harder than you would believe! Best of luck to you in the contest
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