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Old Bleached Gator

Old granite face enjoyed job in sewer He was king of the under ground brewer Everyday he'd hide away With the hot lines he did play Then old bleached gator scared him away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/22/2009 3:55:00 AM
Made me chuckle this one Sara, kool funny poem>>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 7:17:00 PM
LOL, the imagery is fantastic, I can see old granite face high tailin' it outta the sewer. Thanks for sharing such a fun limerick read and for reviewing my works, I truly appreciate it :-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 9/21/2009 5:59:00 PM
Hey, Hey, Hey, I am part of the GATOR nation.... WATCh it......HEHEHE.......:JP]
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Date: 9/21/2009 5:07:00 PM
Ha that is really funny make, make more
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:11:00 PM
he he he ha ha... Poor fella' (I mean the gator) smile MoonBee
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