Old Bleached Gator

Old  granite face enjoyed  job in  sewer
He was king of the under ground brewer
Everyday he'd hide away
With the hot lines he did play
Then old bleached gator scared him away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 22, 2009 at 3:55 AM
Made me chuckle this one Sara, kool funny poem>>James
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September 21, 2009 at 7:17 PM
LOL, the imagery is fantastic, I can see old granite face high tailin' it outta the sewer. Thanks for sharing such a fun limerick read and for reviewing my works, I truly appreciate it :-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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September 21, 2009 at 5:59 PM
Hey, Hey, Hey, I am part of the GATOR nation.... WATCh it......HEHEHE.......:JP]
Sifford Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 5:07 PM
Ha that is really funny make, make more
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September 21, 2009 at 4:11 PM
he he he ha ha... Poor fella' (I mean the gator) smile MoonBee
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