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Old and New

The typewritter the empty page. Time has forgotten you. As we worship the talentless in a foreign age. Cheap **** and a old lush. Poddle skirts and a highschool crush. Wornout jeans and a no longer spoke about bands patch. Sneaking out the window . Unlocking that old gates latch. Forbidden lovers and young hearts loving thta first feeling so very true. The stars are a midnight canvas. Rain and beauty reflect the same to old and new. Coins in a wishing well thrown by a lost young teenage girl. Sweet agony and diary pages. Red lipstick andher hairs natrule curl. the scent of innocence and regret fill's the air. Bitter souls loath the foolish young who reach for a place where only dreamers dare. Like a mustang down a empty backroad through this life we blew. So many feelings it leaves you numb. As the guard must change from old to new.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/24/2009 4:19:00 AM
I like the line "Like a mustang down a empty backroad through this life we blew". Nicely done write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/12/2009 8:49:00 AM
You have Soup Mail, John!
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:08:00 PM
The scent of innocence... feelings of numbness.regrets fillin the air..life is a roller coaster of old and new..past times flushed away to open for new horizons...your writes my pleasure--Charma
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Date: 9/10/2009 7:56:00 PM
What an interesting and moving commentary on the passage of time, generations replacing generations. Sometimes it seems to me there is some "romance" lost among today's teens, where eroticism reigns instead. I for one love staring at the stars and planning for the future on a "midnight canvas." Beautiful write, John! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2009 5:43:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry with us today John. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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