Old Age

No!

Old Age

Won't conquer

My state, for I

Shall dance to the beat of life for all time

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James Fraser

Date: 1/23/2010 5:25:00 AM

Nice write Emmanuel, live life to the full >> James

John Freeman

Date: 10/24/2009 11:02:00 AM

That's the spirit, I know where you're coming from. and best of wishes in this physical too.I enjoyed your awesome Tetractys., Sincerely, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/24/2009 5:31:00 AM

Congratulations, Emmanuel, on placing in Brian’s “Twenty & Five” contest with this wonderful poem. It reminds me of my Grandmother Dane, who at the age of 90, said for the FIRST TIME, "I am GETTING old!" She lived to be 99 years of age and spent the last 6 years partying with young adults (ranging from 23 to 33 years of age). She was going to be sure that another flood of friend deaths did not cause her pain like the previous losses. I will love her always. Excellent poem, Emmanuel! Dane Ann

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/11/2009 4:37:00 PM

That's the spirit that keeps us young, Emmanuel. If we keep dancing, our spirits rejoice. Excellent tetractys

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/11/2009 10:23:00 AM

Very nice! This is a very vivid and funny image just thinking of this. I think this contest really got people's imagination going. Congratulations on being one of the winners in this contest. It certainly well deserved!

Date: 10/9/2009 2:07:00 PM

This one still has me smiling. Got a chuckle out of it too. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing!!!!! Karen