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Ol' Suzy

Ol’ Suzy Remember ol’ Suzy Jackson? That girl was a boat load of fun. Kissing behind the shed, till our faces were red, and we knew we had found the one. I thought I’d lost her when she moved; leaving my love for her unproved. But, I found her again; and I asked for her hand. Now my lonely heart has been soothed. for the Whisper Sweet Nothings contest. 11/17/2017

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Date: 11/25/2017 4:24:00 PM
Fantastic limerick! Great story and rhymes.
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Date: 11/23/2017 2:41:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your honorable mention, Christopher - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 11/19/2017 10:43:00 PM
Cute limerick, Christopher.
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Date: 11/19/2017 6:48:00 PM
So sweet, Christopher. I really like Ol' Suzy!
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Date: 11/17/2017 5:16:00 PM sweet!
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