Christopher Bunton Poet Limerick

Ol' Suzy

Ol’ Suzy


Remember ol’ Suzy Jackson?
That girl was a boat load of fun.
Kissing behind the shed,
till our faces were red,
and we knew we had found the one.

I thought I’d lost her when she moved;
leaving my love for her unproved.
But, I found her again;
and I asked for her hand.
Now my lonely heart has been soothed.


for the Whisper Sweet Nothings contest.  11/17/2017

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Rhoda Tripp November 25, 2017 at 4:24 PM Fantastic limerick! Great story and rhymes. Christopher Bunton December 31, 2022 at 8:58 AM Thank you!

Gregory Richard Barden November 23, 2017 at 2:41 AM Blessings and congratulations on your honorable mention, Christopher - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) Christopher Bunton December 31, 2022 at 8:58 AM Thank you!

Line Gauthier November 19, 2017 at 10:43 PM Cute limerick, Christopher. Christopher Bunton December 31, 2022 at 8:58 AM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2017 at 6:48 PM So sweet, Christopher. I really like Ol' Suzy! Christopher Bunton December 31, 2022 at 8:59 AM Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2017 at 5:16 PM Aww...so sweet! Christopher Bunton December 31, 2022 at 8:59 AM Thank you!