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You are pushing me too far, now we've passed the line, We ain't coming back, that's a fact.. now it's time, To lay down some ground-rules on you fools, because I'm, Fed up.. so shut up! Or get cut up with my rhymes! If you're gonna pass this test, then you have to be the best, You'll get sucked in, shredded up, then spat out as a mess, Are you possessed or just stressed? Just confess, you're like the rest, See me shaking and quaking, as you fake a conquest. You're a little behind, with your big front, I'll lash you with my tounge, if you wanna confront, Try a stunt like that, I'll be forced to come and hunt, Got you right in my sights, I'm alight, and I'll be blunt. You wanna take it from me, you are not steel, You slip and slide from my grip, like a smelly jellied eel, I want to make a deal, but you flake and peal, You fade before my eyes, because you never keep it real. You're living in a dream, now it's seeming to me, Like your nightmare's coming true, no longer fantasy, Nothing you can do, your legs are rooted like a tree, Now I'll open up your mind, and I'll set your brains free! I'm a peaceful man, so okay.. let's talk, I'll chalk it on the board, bottle it up and seal the cork, Remember these words, and replay them as you walk, You're in a world of giants.. go back down your beanstalk! When my back's turned, If I feel your eyes burning, I'll come straight back and we'll see if you are learning, My soul is yearning, to write rhymes and be earning, You're wasting my time, these things are really not concerning. Now I've put on my show.. I will let you suckers go, Smoke it over in your heads, but be hitting it slow, Or I'll mow you all down, with my automatic tounge, Then kick your butt with my Kung-fu, so RUN!

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Date: 11/2/2010 11:00:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Craig. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2010 8:51:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your poetry today with its creative theme.. great title too.. hope your time on Soup will be fun ... and u will check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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