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Okay, Maybe I Am

Okay…maybe I am Some call me romantic But I don’t think that’s true I just write down these feelings I have inside for you I have no formal training No poetry degree Just a pen and paper I keep in front of me So when I think about you Which happens all the time I scribble out some phrases That often seem to rhyme Perhaps they look like verses They’re kept in groups of four And filled with my affection For someone I adore And yes some are poetic Though that is not my plan I just want you forever I want to be your man Okay…they sound romantic And maybe I am too But it’s not really all that hard To write down I love you

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Date: 12/12/2016 6:03:00 AM
Out of all your poems, (and you have plenty that I like) I love this one the best. It's so elegantly simple ... it's me really. Fits my personality to a tee. A truly beautiful poem. Penned by a modest yet gifted romantic poet. You're at the top of your game on this one. Love and joy to you.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so very much Freddie. I am thrilled you liked this and humbled by your comments. I appreciate your visit and kind words my friend.
Date: 12/7/2016 5:26:00 PM
Love in it's simplest and purest form, Chris. Very touching. I'll bet you're killer at the bars:)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 5:28:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, I could be but they can't hear my poetry over that damn band. : )
Date: 12/7/2016 2:33:00 PM
Your poetry isn't just poetry..nor is it just romantic..Its music to my ears..and a song to my heart.You are very talented.I can read you in Forever.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 2:49:00 PM
Well my sweet friend, as long as you are reading, I will be writing and if that is forever, then so be it. :) Thank you so much for always being so kind to me. Every time I see your name on my page I smile.
Date: 12/7/2016 1:45:00 PM
You don't need training to write from the heart. Your heart is training you to write with a heart.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 1:55:00 PM
Thanks so much Holly. I guess it just keeps beating it into me. : )
Date: 12/7/2016 1:43:00 PM
Oh Chris - This is so authentic and sweet. I love it. You bring smiles to people Chris :) Thank you for sharing your poetry.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, I don't think you could have said anything nicer to me. I love making people smile. I appreciate you so much my friend.
Date: 12/7/2016 1:39:00 PM
awhh, tugging the heartstrings, chris.. when we are in touch with the core of the self, what comes out is exactly how we feel... you charm!..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 1:43:00 PM
Well, doing my best. : ) Thank you Nette. Your kind words make me smile.
Date: 12/7/2016 1:24:00 PM
You're one of the best romantic writers.. yes being in love makes it easy, I'm sure, but not everyone who is in love can write so eloquently. You have a gift.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 1:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Rebecca, your kind words are always a wonderful gift to me.
Date: 12/7/2016 12:18:00 PM
Simplicity of a loving heart rings loud in a woman's soul...beautiful Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 1:41:00 PM
Thanks so much Tim. I appreciate it.
Date: 12/7/2016 11:53:00 AM
aww what a charming poem Chris I would be made up to have poems written like this for me - you have such a lovely romantic pen:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Jan for your always kind thought in regards to my poetry. I am so grateful you stopped by today
Date: 12/7/2016 11:43:00 AM
WoW! Chris, you are most definitely a romantic. I hope that your inspiration sees all these beautiful poems you write for her. This is the type of poem that can make a girl feel all warm inside. WoW! A without doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 1:40:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend Alexis. I always have a warm feeling in my heart when you visit my poetry. I appreciate you so much

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