Okay, Maybe I Am

Okay…maybe I am  

Some call me romantic
But I don’t think that’s true
I just write down these feelings 
I have inside for you

I have no formal training
No poetry degree
Just a pen and paper
I keep in front of me

So when I think about you
Which happens all the time
I scribble out some phrases
That often seem to rhyme

Perhaps they look like verses
They’re kept in groups of four
And filled with my affection
For someone I adore

And yes some are poetic
Though that is not my plan
I just want you forever
I want to be your man

Okay…they sound romantic
And maybe I am too
But it’s not really all that hard
To write down I love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 12, 2016 at 6:03 AM
Out of all your poems, (and you have plenty that I like) I love this one the best. It's so elegantly simple ... it's me really. Fits my personality to a tee. A truly beautiful poem. Penned by a modest yet gifted romantic poet. You're at the top of your game on this one. Love and joy to you.
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December 12, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Thanks so very much Freddie. I am thrilled you liked this and humbled by your comments. I appreciate your visit and kind words my friend.
Turner Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Love in it's simplest and purest form, Chris. Very touching. I'll bet you're killer at the bars:)
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December 7, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Thanks Daniel, I could be but they can't hear my poetry over that damn band. : )
Chircop Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Your poetry isn't just poetry..nor is it just romantic..Its music to my ears..and a song to my heart.You are very talented.I can read you in Forever.
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December 7, 2016 at 2:49 PM
Well my sweet friend, as long as you are reading, I will be writing and if that is forever, then so be it. :) Thank you so much for always being so kind to me. Every time I see your name on my page I smile.
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December 7, 2016 at 1:45 PM
You don't need training to write from the heart. Your heart is training you to write with a heart.
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December 7, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Thanks so much Holly. I guess it just keeps beating it into me. : )
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December 7, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Oh Chris - This is so authentic and sweet. I love it. You bring smiles to people Chris :) Thank you for sharing your poetry.
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December 7, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you Heidi, I don't think you could have said anything nicer to me. I love making people smile. I appreciate you so much my friend.
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December 7, 2016 at 1:39 PM
awhh, tugging the heartstrings, chris.. when we are in touch with the core of the self, what comes out is exactly how we feel... you charm!..huggs
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December 7, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Well, doing my best. : ) Thank you Nette. Your kind words make me smile.
Teagan Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 1:24 PM
You're one of the best romantic writers.. yes being in love makes it easy, I'm sure, but not everyone who is in love can write so eloquently. You have a gift.
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December 7, 2016 at 1:42 PM
Thank you so much Rebecca, your kind words are always a wonderful gift to me.
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December 7, 2016 at 12:18 PM
Simplicity of a loving heart rings loud in a woman's soul...beautiful Chris
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December 7, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Thanks so much Tim. I appreciate it.
Allison Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 11:53 AM
aww what a charming poem Chris I would be made up to have poems written like this for me - you have such a lovely romantic pen:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 7, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Thank you Jan for your always kind thought in regards to my poetry. I am so grateful you stopped by today
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December 7, 2016 at 11:43 AM
WoW! Chris, you are most definitely a romantic. I hope that your inspiration sees all these beautiful poems you write for her. This is the type of poem that can make a girl feel all warm inside. WoW! A without doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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December 7, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Thank you my sweet friend Alexis. I always have a warm feeling in my heart when you visit my poetry. I appreciate you so much
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