ok, this is not a poem, but it is a really long comment on a poem by Ryan Emerald.
ok, lets get some thing straight. my lies? if they are lies then you just screwed yourself
buddy. cos' you believed every "lie" and if i believe something, should i really be persecuted?
deleted? killed even? why should i take this crap from you? all i did was love you. and then
you pull this. so what is it, liar? what is it? just last week you loved me. so stop fooling
yourself by saying you can get better than me. your girl is fugly. just like you. you look like
job of the hut. bet it felt great, thinking you could actually hurt me by "slamming" me. well i
have news for you. i have more crap to say about you than you have to say about me, so
you can go look through your little "slam" and delete all the lies you just wrote.. sorry to
blow your cover, RYAN DIMAIO. hah, you are such a jerk. your dead to me..... just a lost
love that never was. so take that and think of something to slam me with, your little lies. you
are mental. crazy. YOU ARE A JOKE! so there, take that and shove that in yoru little diary.
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