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Oil Paintings-3

One Big Cracker Dear God, I don't know what to write you I wrote many lines and then scribbled I know you like neat and tidy things I have been sitting by the window since morn In my grandma's home You made her alone, remember? But I visited her daily after school She is lonely and keeps waiting for me She bakes my favourite cookies and cakes You gifted her with nice hands and thoughts Two days ago she brought me over for keeps I didn't go to school today My heart is iron heavy and my legs can't carry it Do you like to take moms and dads Only on Friday the thirteenth? * You also took James mother at the same time Sara was seen crying, she didn't tell me why I didn't see her playing with her brother next door Do you have enough room for so many people? Granny, Uncle Mark held my hand at the funeral Uncle Richard, Aunt Jane hugged and kissed me Many many people came to wish them goodbye Granny is old, she placed a letter on their coffin The graveyard was full of flowers, candles and tears Mom and Dad were buried together and Granny says she also wants to lie with them But I don't know where my bed is I thought you would also burst one big cracker at the cemetery** So that we could all be together with you God, when are you going to burst the next cracker? Love, Jim FIRST Balveen Cheema November 15, 2015 Contest: Oil Painting-3 Sponsor: Eve Roper * Paris terror mayhem on November 13, 2015, is no less than any terrorist attack in the world. Innocents die and families suffer. ** A bomb goes off at a funeral in Baghdad.

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Date: 11/18/2015 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on a lovely and merited top win, Balveen! Your interpretation is creative and unique. I'm touched by its contents. ~ Regards // paul
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/19/2015 5:23:00 AM
Thanks for the appreciation Paul! Regards, Balveen
Date: 11/18/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thanks for including me.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 9:58:00 AM
The pleasure is mine, Richard! Regards, Balveen
Date: 11/18/2015 8:13:00 AM
Balveen,congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 9:58:00 AM
Thanks Alexis! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/18/2015 7:48:00 AM
For me this is truly one of the best, congratulations.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 7:53:00 AM
I knew you would like it! No wonder you will find yourself in it as Uncle Richard! Three poetry soupers figure in my poem-Richard, Mark and Jan( Jane). Balveen
Date: 11/17/2015 9:50:00 PM
Balveen,, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 5:17:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 11/17/2015 9:35:00 PM
Nice win Balveen congratulations.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 5:17:00 AM
Thanks Michael!
Date: 11/17/2015 7:55:00 PM
Congratulations on the well-deserved win:)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 5:18:00 AM
Thanks Elis!
Date: 11/17/2015 6:46:00 PM
Congratulations Balveen
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 5:18:00 AM
Thanks Nayda!
Date: 11/17/2015 5:58:00 PM
Oh Balveen what a sad interpretation of the image -I have read your comments to Andrea and Eve :-( congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 5:19:00 AM
Ths sweet Aunt Jane is you! Love Jan!
Date: 11/16/2015 6:17:00 PM
you found an interesting way to weave together this challenge of the picture with current tragic events. Great creativity.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/16/2015 7:17:00 PM
Andrea, the expression is so lonely and lost, it had something to doith a major loss. Love, Balveen
Date: 11/16/2015 2:23:00 PM
This is so beautiful a 7 it is going to be hard to choose.I just had to tell you but this little boy lost his dad a few months back, dad was only 26. Sorry I had to write. Hugs Eve
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/16/2015 7:16:00 PM
Eve, many times I was attracted to this painting of a child with sad expression and felt his world had crumbled. It was only after the Paris attack I found my answer. So, it has fitted in well unknowingly-God sent me the message! You are a an incredible artist. Love, Balveen

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