Oil

Oil covered ocean Destroying God's small creatures Cannot be condoned

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2010 4:23:00 PM

Yes Francine the photo told a sad story and your words state the same ..well done Haiku and I know this contest is now over but keep entering all the contests offered to get your poetry read and seen... luv.. and thankxxx for your great comments ..appreciate... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Katherine Stella

Date: 5/17/2010 3:55:00 PM

gl in contest with this one I did not see this on contest so I missed out but glad I caught this one such a sad day when this happens to gods creatures great write also thanks for your kind comment

Derrick Burton

Date: 5/15/2010 11:09:00 AM

Wow what a way to say a entire book worth. Enjoyed this short and powerful read and have a great day.:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/14/2010 5:12:00 PM

Great write that is so true...I hope that their repair is done soon...Keep the ceative pen flowing...Sara

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/14/2010 9:43:00 AM

Nicely written. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Thanks for your comments on my work. Dan C