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Oh You

Oh you With your smile That lights up my mind Oh you With your eyes That paint my insides Oh you With your lovely soul That helps me get through the new and the old Oh you with your disappearing act That shivers up my spine, you never had much tact

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/6/2011 10:10:00 AM
Thank you. I fixed it.
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Date: 2/6/2011 10:08:00 AM
Good rhyme and rhythm, what about the last word?
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