Oh, Well

That first sip of coffee 
on a Sunday morn,
Contentment covers me 
like a warm blanket.

All is quiet but the occasional drip
from the kitchen faucet.
If only this peaceful feeling
would stay the whole day through.

I watch out the window
in hopes of seeing her.
It has been over a month
since her last visit.

She should have brought 
the newest addition to her family
for viewing by now.

The doe and her offspring
are what make the view from my deck
spectacular,
instead of just nice.

The peace did not last long this morning
Quiet air has now been shattered
by singing canaries
and squawking budgies.

Oh, well!
it was lovely while it lasted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 11:06 PM
this is awesome, Francine, you just waiting for the deer like that. Taking ordinary moments and making them special, which poets can do so well!!love how you ended it with the squawking birds!
Cooper Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:28 PM
great pen
Johnson Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Amoura featured hey ? We have green wild budgies in thousands, out near old Dirranabndi, 400 miles west of here, noisy buggers too. Life is boring, i'm insuring that i get the lotto in too, THEN :) We will see who blinks first:)
Hendricks Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Awww, nice. I'm happy to know I'm not the only one who dislikes "birdsong". (You might like to peek at my "Wooden Soul" regarding my take on birdsong.) I like your gentle flow here. Well done, Francine. :))
Devonshire Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 1:57 PM
What a shame the doe didn't bring her fawn by for a "viewing," Francine. Usually the birds add a melodious quality to mornings, but I'm laughing at the thought of "squawking budgies." We don't have these birds here, but I might be tempted to lure them somewhere else if they interrupted a serene moment like this. Beautiful write, Francine! Love, Carolyn
Dailey Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 11:30 AM
I don't care much for free verse - I just need some rhythm and rhyme but I do like the picture your poem paints. Maybe I am starting to change my view. Mike
Dailey Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 11:30 AM
the system burped and so you got two copies of my comment - sorry.
Dailey Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 11:29 AM
I don't care much for free verse - I just need some rhythm and rhyme but I do like the picture your poem paints. Maybe I am starting to change my view. Mike
Foulk Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 10:28 AM
that first sip of coffee what could be better, as was this beautiful poem you wrote.
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