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Oh, the Thrill

Oh, the thrill of the annual school ice-skating races! Back in the days before recent warming trends good old Lincoln School (K-5), affectionately dubbed "Stinkin' Lncoln," held races for each class in the dead of winter, on an unforgivingly frigid Sunday in January---I don't know how they managed to pick the coldest day of the year, but they did! We kids, we contestants, so looked forward to that special Sunday, where we got to compete for a blue, for a red, or for a white ribbon; and for the adulation sure to be heaped upon us by proud family members... But those poor spectators, our parents and siblings who froze their fingers and toes off, if not their bottoms and tops, waiting out there in the howling cold 'forever' for an event that might take, oh, a minute or two at most--- And did I mention that I fell down, right on my face at the start of each race? For five years in a row? Until my very last race (5th grade), when---I fell at the end, just as I was about to cross the finish line first?...Yet it remains my most cherished memory of good old Lincoln School Entry for "My Youth" contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Date: 11/27/2018 7:45:00 PM
Your spectacular reverie brings a smile to my face, Gershon. Great storytelling that captivated my attention and imagination from start to finish. Loved it! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my dear friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/28/2018 12:52:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, my dear friend. Warmest winter wishes to you, Susan. Season's best! ~ Gershon
Date: 11/27/2018 7:34:00 PM
man...my first pair of skates...talk about learning how to 'walk' all over again lol
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Date: 11/28/2018 12:51:00 PM
Those were the days! Happy days!
Date: 11/27/2018 7:24:00 PM
That sounds more like me...I was a klutzy person most of my life. Well done and I hope you mastered it.
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Date: 11/28/2018 12:51:00 PM
Ha, ha! I'm super-klutzy now, as old sports injuries which set in about four years ago have more than taken their toll...But it sounds like you're headed in the other direction! Here's to gracefulness! Best wishes, gw
Date: 11/27/2018 6:54:00 PM
Such an enjoyable prose bio snapshot, Gershon. Ah, happy childhood memories serves us good in a lifelong way. Your talented pen always muse inspire. Pure poetry written w/golden emotions. Love and joy always.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/28/2018 12:49:00 PM
Thank you, FRJ. Always a lift to read your comments. Blessings, gw
Date: 11/27/2018 5:08:00 PM
Happy days for sure Gershon, I've got two left feet on ice, got a wet ass and knees many times. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 11/28/2018 12:48:00 PM
Ooh that tickles, just reading about it! Stay warm this winter! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 11/27/2018 4:06:00 PM
And those memories are the best. I'll bet the cold didn't even bother you at all. : ) Nicely done my friend. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 11/28/2018 12:47:00 PM
You nailed it! I never felt the cold---unlike my parents, who were frozen stiff by the time I fell on my face every year... Oh, well. That was a looooooong time ago. :) gw

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