Oh, the Thrill

Oh, the thrill of the annual school ice-skating races!
Back in the days before recent warming trends
good old Lincoln School (K-5), affectionately dubbed
"Stinkin' Lncoln," held races for each class in the 
dead of winter, on an unforgivingly frigid Sunday 
in January---I don't know how they managed to 
pick the coldest day of the year, but they did!

We kids, we contestants, so looked forward to that
special Sunday, where we got to compete for a blue,
for a red, or for a white ribbon; and for the adulation 
sure to be heaped upon us by proud family members...

But those poor spectators, our parents and siblings
who froze their fingers and toes off, if not their bottoms
and tops, waiting out there in the howling cold 'forever'
for an event that might take, oh, a minute or two at most---

And did I mention that I fell down, right on my face 
at the start of each race?  For five years in a row?  Until
my very last race (5th grade), when---I fell at the end,
just as I was about to cross the finish line first?...Yet it
remains my most cherished memory of good old Lincoln School

                
                 Entry for "My Youth" contest
                     Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Your spectacular reverie brings a smile to my face, Gershon. Great storytelling that captivated my attention and imagination from start to finish. Loved it! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, my dear friend. Warmest winter wishes to you, Susan. Season's best! ~ Gershon
Blown Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:34 PM
man...my first pair of skates...talk about learning how to 'walk' all over again lol
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Those were the days! Happy days!
Kiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:24 PM
That sounds more like me...I was a klutzy person most of my life. Well done and I hope you mastered it.
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Ha, ha! I'm super-klutzy now, as old sports injuries which set in about four years ago have more than taken their toll...But it sounds like you're headed in the other direction! Here's to gracefulness! Best wishes, gw
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Such an enjoyable prose bio snapshot, Gershon. Ah, happy childhood memories serves us good in a lifelong way. Your talented pen always muse inspire. Pure poetry written w/golden emotions. Love and joy always.
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Thank you, FRJ. Always a lift to read your comments. Blessings, gw
Cunningham Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Happy days for sure Gershon, I've got two left feet on ice, got a wet ass and knees many times. Good luck. Tom.
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:48 PM
Ooh that tickles, just reading about it! Stay warm this winter! Best wishes, Gershon
Green Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 4:06 PM
And those memories are the best. I'll bet the cold didn't even bother you at all. : ) Nicely done my friend. Best of luck in the contest
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:47 PM
You nailed it! I never felt the cold---unlike my parents, who were frozen stiff by the time I fell on my face every year... Oh, well. That was a looooooong time ago. :) gw
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